You

Heart - stoped.
Blood - freezed.
My soul.
Want breath.
Spend words?-
No need.
You - hope,
Which feed.
My life.
My history.
Push try.-
Change destiny.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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October 14, 2008 at 1:59 PM
this style works for me i like it very much. i here wondering why i cant meet a girl like you. spend words? i like the response no need! i'm turned on. JHL
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