You

I want to feel inspired,
To write a poem I try.
Yet tonight I feel so tired
Almost about to cry.
I am trying hard to think,
Of what I have to say.
My thoughts are at the brink.
Isn’t there any way?!
To write what I feel
‘Bout this boy who is anew.
This feeling, so surreal
But for once I am true.
I float on a cloud
And no longer am I blue.
For I finally found
My poem in you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Paul Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 8:49 PM
nice poem................................................its just the representation of ur feeling.
Richards Avatar
October 12, 2008 at 8:50 AM
What a perfect way to express your feelings, and yes...we all stumble at times to get the words out. You said it beautifully! Keep writing...you have so much heart! ~ :) Carrie
White Avatar
October 11, 2008 at 5:48 PM
hi I like this write, you might enjoy my write, writer's block, I like the flow of this, thanks for your comment, take care D-nyce
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
October 10, 2008 at 12:41 PM
Lucky person! Cute love poem. God Bless. Vince
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