You

Some things about you I've come to know.
To you this I bestow.
More precious than any stone, a queen that grants power to the throne. 
More lovely than a flower, a goddess that possesses unlimited power.
More sweet than any candy, a drug stronger than brandy.
More beautiful than Aphrodite, a Holier power than god almighty.
More adorable than a puppy, a woman that turns me to putty.
That's what you are.
You're more beautiful than any moon or star.
So perfect in every way.
Once I'm yours I'm here to stay.
As long as you'll have me.
You make me feel so carefree.
You're the oxygen in my breath.
With no you it'd mean certain death.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 4/12/2018 9:40:00 PM
Love is powerful, and true love is rare, hold on to it tightly. Great work!
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Date: 4/12/2018 9:38:00 PM
Love is powerful, and true love is rare, hold on to it tightly. Great work!
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Date: 4/12/2018 9:40:00 PM
Thank you. It is rare especially in today's world and I let her know how special she is to me every day.
Date: 4/12/2018 9:37:00 PM
Love is powerful, and true love is rare, hold on to it tightly. Great work!
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