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Yoshino Cherry Tree

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Yoshino cherry tree, blossoms glistening in the sun Most vibrant display of white-pink blossoms, with faint almond fragrance Delightful moment, overcome by a massive sneeze attack *** October 15, 2019 F F I series 29 sijo Brian Strand, sponsor

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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/16/2019 2:55:00 AM
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Oh that's absolutely brilliant, Mark! I so enjoyed both the beautiful atmosphere you set with the first two lines and the witty, unexpected conclusion! Best of the bunch!
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Mark Toney
Date: 10/16/2019 11:17:00 AM
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Thanks, Wendy. You made my day! ~Mark
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Harry Horsman
Date: 10/15/2019 11:35:00 PM
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Is it the almond, that you are allergic to, i wonder. Your description of the tree is one of love...Great Sijo.
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Mark Toney
Date: 10/16/2019 11:16:00 AM
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I don't know, Harry, I'm pretty much allergic to every tree out there in the Spring :) Thank you for your encouraging compliment! ~Mark
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/15/2019 6:30:00 PM
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Hello Mark Toney, it sounds like you are allergic to the cherry blossoms. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/17/2019 10:45:00 AM
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How could i tell because you sneezed. Have a nice day my friend.
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Mark Toney
Date: 10/15/2019 6:33:00 PM
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Lol... how could you tell? Thanks for stopping by, Darlene. ~Mark

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