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Yonder Clouds

she hears a nostalgic lullaby yonder clouds 06.23.18

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Date: 7/10/2018 9:08:00 PM

Excellent write my friend

Moon Flower
Date: 7/14/2018 4:23:00 AM

Thank you, Al.

Date: 6/28/2018 11:20:00 PM

Many directions possible for the reader in line 3 Moon...well done

Moon Flower
Date: 7/2/2018 7:30:00 PM

Thank you, James.

Date: 6/26/2018 2:34:00 PM

there is music in the air, this was short but brings a lot to the mind. well said

Moon Flower
Date: 6/28/2018 9:08:00 PM

Thank you, Casarah. :)

Date: 6/25/2018 11:35:00 AM

Moon Flower this is such a lovely haiku! I can drift with clouds and doze off to their song! Well done, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Moon Flower
Date: 6/25/2018 11:39:00 AM

Glad to read you here, Pandita. Many thanks, my friend! hugs

Date: 6/23/2018 7:14:00 AM

Very lovely

Moon Flower
Date: 6/23/2018 8:22:00 AM

Thank you, Tim. :)

Date: 6/23/2018 5:52:00 AM

Inspired. sleep comes to those who... dwell nostalgically... the nightingale sings... The elipses used as spacers. Thanks for the inspiration Mick

Moon Flower
Date: 6/23/2018 6:58:00 AM

You're welcome, Mick. And you never cease to amaze me with your precise interpretation. This is greatly appreciated. :)