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Yonder Clouds

she hears 
     a nostalgic lullaby
           yonder clouds

06.23.18

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Al Juman

July 10, 2018 at 9:08 PM

Excellent write my friend

Moon Flower

July 14, 2018 at 4:23 AM

Thank you, Al.

James Marshall Goff

June 28, 2018 at 11:20 PM

Many directions possible for the reader in line 3 Moon...well done

Moon Flower

July 2, 2018 at 7:30 PM

Thank you, James.

Casarah Nance

June 26, 2018 at 2:34 PM

there is music in the air, this was short but brings a lot to the mind. well said

Moon Flower

June 28, 2018 at 9:08 PM

Thank you, Casarah. :)

Pandita Sietesantos

June 25, 2018 at 11:35 AM

Moon Flower this is such a lovely haiku! I can drift with clouds and doze off to their song! Well done, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Moon Flower

June 25, 2018 at 11:39 AM

Glad to read you here, Pandita. Many thanks, my friend! hugs

Tim Smith

June 23, 2018 at 7:14 AM

Very lovely

Moon Flower

June 23, 2018 at 8:22 AM

Thank you, Tim. :)

Mick Talbot

June 23, 2018 at 5:52 AM

Inspired. sleep comes to those who... dwell nostalgically... the nightingale sings... The elipses used as spacers. Thanks for the inspiration Mick

Moon Flower

June 23, 2018 at 6:58 AM

You're welcome, Mick. And you never cease to amaze me with your precise interpretation. This is greatly appreciated. :)

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