Yodas Warning

Wish I, future could not see.
Sad I am, for what will be.
Tell you, I won’t to any degree.
Days these are, troubling to me,
Heed time, bold be, resist plea.
Changes see I, you not be free.
Jedis’ wisdom, tells just to flee.
Too win one day, falter not thee.
Honesty must keep, fall not on knee.
Afraid be, before soul is esprit.
For granted, take all things, we.
In woods standing tall like tree,
Spreading our lives in hurry,
Flowing, care without, Waves Sea,
Beyond thyself, watch for tragedy.
For benevolent Jedi, mindful of evil be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 4:42 PM
wow Cecil, , i like the winning poem, Congrats~SKAT
Jones Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 4:35 PM
Congrats..:-)
A   Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 4:25 PM
CECIL, a nice winning poem... many congrats :-).... always & forever* PD
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 12:40 PM
Cecil congratulations on your Yoda. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie
Sister Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 10:50 AM
This is very good. Loved the message. Great win! Jen
Jerden Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 9:04 AM
Monorhyme hard enough by self is. To match with Yoda talk, great skill required is. On your win congratulations we give!
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March 22, 2013 at 5:50 AM
Many congrats on your winning spot Cecil xx
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March 10, 2013 at 6:31 PM
I love it! An awesome poem that is written exactly as he would say it. I think Yoda would be proud.
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