Yikes, Mountain Mike, Recovery

Only four stairs to ascend!
And with a broken leg on the mend?
It felt like a wet noodle.
Or more aptly, hot Stroodle .

Hanging on to that railing for dear life, 
As though we were  husband and wife.
With a six foot grandson at the top of the 
stairs.
My daughter below, in case I flop like a
gigantic Black bear!

Determined as heck to see my dear cat.
By the time, I reached the top, I was
Feeling as a dead rat.
By then, I wanted to walk on my own
floors.
Which were as difficult to maneuver
as rotted out, warped doors!

Nothing at all felt good nor right to me,
Til I saw my calico cat trotting over....
whoopee!
Those calico colors , so sundae like! 
I heard her joke and whisper so softly..
 “ Hello, Mountain Mike! “

She asked questions, that nobody could hear.
She purred so sweetly, “Hello, Mommy, dear!
Then, Irene, asked, “ When are you coming 
back home?
Two months alone is far too long for any cat 
daughter to roam!”

I simply had no answer to give!
The pain so intense, I thought I had not
long to live.
So, I promised her, I was doing my best!
And her Mom, Mountain Mike, would be 
returning for another stair test.

Till one day, our lives would be as they
once serenely once were.
Writing poetry, waiting for spring and 
petting her glistening fur.
Pondering  the moon, with her paws 
about my neck.
‘Tis heaven for me on this earth, for
without you, Irene, life makes no sense, 
and is but a torturous wreck!


Dedicated to Irene, my dear cat!
Missing you,
Mom

Special Acknowledgment to:
Am Gilmore, my thoughtful friend who has 
penned eloquent poems about my cat, Queen Irene. 
Ann is an outstanding and loving friend, everyday! 
Thanks, Ann


And to my daughter, Elena, who is my 24 hour a 
day caregiver, 7days a week.
I do not know how she does it!
And thanks to Eddie, who helped with
the stairs. Congrats on your high GPA

Mom and Grandother



                  12/8/2022

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Date: 1/10/2022 8:12:00 AM
I am so glad you are on the mend my dear friend. This fine creation shows what a great and kind person/poetess you are, imho. So very true, family is everything and our beloved are the essence of joy in our lives! A fav- a jewel. God bless..
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Date: 1/10/2022 11:18:00 AM
Robert? Yes, family is AlL. My poems all amaze me because I wonder who wrote it. I won’t be pleased till I am back home. Elena is a knockout, so is Eddie and credit to my traders. You lift me up! Esecuay,now Thank you for the Fav. Love Pangie
Date: 1/8/2022 5:30:00 PM
That you still have a sense of humor is a good sign. Hang in there, OK?! Poetry hugs, Gershon
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Date: 1/9/2022 4:31:00 AM
Yes. All that comedy at THE PICKLE BARRELL IN OLD TOWN, CHICAGO AND OTHER CLUBS,Keep me going, plus THEHOLY CITY Zoo IN SF. ADD ALL the years at Second City IIMPROV. )))) I cam improv quite welll. But cannot write comedy. It bores me. Pangie. Can rack up people in real life. On paper...no.
Date: 1/8/2022 7:47:00 AM
It's early days yet but everyday is a day nearer to good health and you couldn't wish for a better pair of helpers. Tom
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Date: 1/8/2022 11:29:00 AM
Oh golly..THOUGHT I answered this. Gee! Elena and Eddie are the best, righto. Pangie
Date: 1/8/2022 7:05:00 AM
At least you see a bit of humor in your situation. I enjoyed your telling of your visit home. Hang in there - Bob H
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Date: 1/8/2022 11:26:00 AM
Humor needed, Bob ! I think of men and women in war. OMG. Far mo re injured an I. But I am terribly Impatient with my recovery...ugh Pangie
Date: 1/8/2022 5:36:00 AM
Well done Pangie, your determination will get you through, with the help of your daughter and Queen Irene too… Belle
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Date: 1/8/2022 11:33:00 AM
I wishQueen Irene were here. She is at my house only. I am at my daughters house. Their dog is an avid cat hater. Your words mean so much. Pangie
Date: 1/8/2022 5:14:00 AM
I was holding my breath as you were climbing those stairs! You are one tough lady! I think many would be too afraid to already be challenging those heights… such good news! Thank you for sharing in poetic style :)
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Date: 1/8/2022 11:40:00 AM
PS...moutainMike learned her lesson. To master one step per day....not 10 in one day. I learned from Hurting myself ....I am done in.. Hugs. Pangie
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