William Kelii Kekaula Poet Tanka

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Yields In Yellows

*Image of Safflower Flower Saffron by Pixabay.

Yields In Yellows

Signs in marigold
with a daffodil accent
hints a yarrow drawl,
laughed I a sunflower be
saffron breaths refrain in gold.

2020 March 18
*HM*
Bite Size Poem no14
~~Line Gauthier: Judged 2021 July 28
*1st Place*
STRAND choice L, any theme any form
~~Brian Strand: Judged 2020 March 20

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Paula Goldsmith July 28, 2021 at 11:48 AM Congratulations on your win. What a fun story/write. A pretty yellow flower picture. Have a blessed day with your win............... William Kelii Kekaula July 28, 2021 at 12:00 PM I welcome your highlights, Paula, and a blessed day to you too my friend, Aloha!

Christuraj Alex July 28, 2021 at 6:11 AM Beautiful Creation. Congratulations! William Kelii Kekaula July 28, 2021 at 6:26 AM I am grateful to you, Christuraj, Aloha!

Kim Rodrigues July 28, 2021 at 6:00 AM Congratulations, William! Yarrow drawl and saffron breaths! William Kelii Kekaula July 28, 2021 at 6:03 AM Thanks, Kim, and my compliments to you as well my friend, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2020 at 5:20 PM what cute imagery this has! I see you won a contest with a top win with it too.BIG congrats, William. William Kelii Kekaula March 28, 2020 at 5:32 PM Yeah, I had fun making this little ditty, Andrea, with my appreciation -- Aloha!~@wk

Sam Kauffman March 21, 2020 at 1:28 PM William, Congratulations on your top win! So many wonderful allusions to the color of sunshine - yellow! Aloha my friend! a hui hou kahou' William Kelii Kekaula March 21, 2020 at 1:43 PM Many thanks, Sam, my friend, me ke aloha pumehana -- Aloha!~@wk

Anisha Dutta March 21, 2020 at 8:07 AM WOW! BIG CONGRATS to win TOP on your super excellent composition.. Blessing always. William Kelii Kekaula March 21, 2020 at 12:28 PM Much appreciated, Anisha, thank you -- Aloha!~@wk