Yield Bump Ahead

Violently delicious
You play with my mind
Looking for logic i can't swim against time
Am I marked to be doomed
Am I  cursed or worse already dead
I can't help to think
But thats when Iam at my worst
Its just the way we  play your cards
When I think I have a chance
It all breaks down
Its a sweet party just like you Let me dance  the hood of my car
Let me scream and shout
Ill wait for this  time and space
Iam a lucky man
But so God damn.unlucky
Is it just all mankind
What happened in the last 5 years
What happened to luck, posterity,sucess
Do I shout out.. hey you !
Stop this merry go round
It ain't merry I quit booze
I quit weed, I quit living for the future
How can you be so proud
Just take a look at this town
If you got a better name
You better use it
If  someone can stop this spiral
We better do it
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Smith  Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 1:19 AM
Raw, urgent, and emotionally charged—the poem captures a mind caught in a fierce spiral of frustration, uncertainty, and disillusionment. Its fractured momentum suits the feeling of a merry-go-round that has become impossible to endure.
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August 23, 2026 at 2:55 PM
Thanks,I gave a raw copy away with some art on it..It was a one sit write on a Saturday night, lonely enough to finish myself,but always seen that as a dirty cheap exit and makes a mess of the people that love you,So no choice but to fight demons with violent deliciousness ..lol..In love with verse.Thanks for your comment and reading my verses
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