Yet Again

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I have my infection back, so fed up!!! Four times already this year and it is only the beginning of March.

Why are you back again? you keep plaguing me, creeping up on me attacking me from within. Insidiously you invade, loving my warmth and my sweetness settling in, making yourself at home You attack me slyly not welcome in the least, yet you do not care what damage you do. Four times now this year you have invaded me rushing into my body germ that you are. Enough I say, be gone! find yourself another host. Leave me alone to recover, go find yourself someone else.

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/25/2015 6:51:00 PM

I am sorry Shadow. I hope they find a way to cure you once and for all. My best wishes and my love are with you. I hope as I write this everything is better.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/25/2015 7:07:00 PM

ty Maurice slowly on the mend hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2015 6:22:00 PM

I really relate to this too, Shadow. it's just horrible and I know how it is bothering you . Is this the kind of poem you would consider a hate poem. I want to do your contest but not sure how to approach it. Do you mean we can write about anything that is hateful or a funny one about something we love?

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/7/2015 4:10:00 PM

my idea was opposite sides of a coin so you could even combine both in same poem Andrea I am sure it will be great which ever way you go hugs and ty

Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/6/2015 6:17:00 PM

Dear Shadow, I can completely understand this write of yours my daughter has this same trouble, I feel so bad for her and for you my friend. She seems to get over it and it's back again, I can't count how many times we've rushed her to the emg. with this problem. Great write kiddo, take care of yourself and I hope it gets better for you, chin up , cheri

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/7/2015 4:08:00 PM

ty Cherl nice to see you hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 3/6/2015 3:48:00 PM

If conventional medicine isn't working Shadow why not try some homeopathic - anything is work a try. Hope you are well again soon:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/7/2015 4:07:00 PM

anything is worth a try Jan ty hugs