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Yesterday's Shadows

Oh, yesterday's shadows, in dim corridors of my mind; let me go- I wish for flower meadows, I want to leave all the sorrow behind. But, shadows come and cling, they stab me all over like a bee sting; I just want to hear the birds outside sing. Shadows creeping, past memories that come seeping- I quietly sleeping. Yesterday's ghosts of sweet love who repose, always in my heart and soul twined; shadows on wing, feathery shapes weeping.
____________________________ April 29, 2020 Poetry/Rhyme/Yesterday's Shadows Copyright Protected, ID 20-1247-478-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Shadows sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke Second Place ____________________________ Rhyming Verified on RhymeZone Pattern - abab ccc ddd abcd Syllables Verifed on HowManySyllables Pattern - 6/8/10/10 6/10/10 4/8/6 10/8/4/6

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Date: 5/1/2020 6:59:00 PM
So beautiful and moving, Constance. CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Constance La France
Date: 5/2/2020 10:38:00 AM
Janice, thanks for the visit, the compliment on my poem and the congrats _Constance
Date: 5/1/2020 4:24:00 PM
Beautifully crafted in form, word, and message, Constance. Love the final line "feathery shapes weeping." Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs ~ John
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Constance La France
Date: 5/2/2020 10:39:00 AM
John, thanks for the visit and compliment and the congratulations, appreciate _Constance
Date: 5/1/2020 10:17:00 AM
Congrats on your win Constance, it seems no matter how hard we try, yesterday's shadows never go away. Stay safe. Hugs, John
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Constance La France
Date: 5/2/2020 10:40:00 AM
John, thanks for the visit, the comment and the congrats, appreciate _Constance
Date: 4/30/2020 9:06:00 PM
I’m fascinated with this poem and it has a certain charismatic charm. Well done I posted a new poem Loving You let me know what ya think.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/30/2020 11:33:00 PM
Matt, thanks for the visit and the compliment _Constance
Date: 4/29/2020 12:13:00 PM
How well we knoe, all of yesterday's ghosts. Well done, good luck in the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/29/2020 5:45:00 PM
DM, thanks for the visit and the compliment on my poem _Constance

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