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Yesterdays Joys

At the end of my tunnel I use to see the light. It was built not with rock but with thick vines green and bright. I could see my path it was there I always walked, sometimes I would sit and think, listen as plants talked. Sweet peas, marigolds and pansies were at my side, I lived my life with friends in who I would confide. The air was scented in sachets rare, coloured in muted tones stripped down bare. Growing above me were angel lamps, also gorgeous dahlias, on the ramps. I remember in the large blue pond, a rare pair of two toned swans, while below the weeping willow, an almost sleeping chipmunk yawns. Convergent ladybugs clustering for warmth on the ground, drifting leaves acted like an ocean wave just to confound. Back then switched on lights would decorate the night sky with stars but now alarms sound as they shut me down behind these bars.
22~10~2014 Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst Contest Name:Pick a Title Yesterdays Joys
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Gibson Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 7:42 PM
Well done, Maurice. Congrats on a fine win.
Squyres Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 6:58 PM
Your images were delightful and the poem well written. Really enjoyed this... thanks for sharing and congrats on your win. btw: Loved that 6th couplet !!
Haight Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 3:00 PM
Maurice, congratulations on your win for this poem. I enjoyed the imagery and metaphors. Sandra
Allison Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 2:38 AM
many congrats on your win Maurice:-) Hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 3:54 AM
No your style of writing :)...hugs Tim
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 10:09 PM
well, looky there. a win for you too!! I believe this counts toward your contest wins, it's only HM's that don't count, Maurice. I have a friend here who knows a lot about Soup. i will ask him about that theory of yours!!
Smith Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 11:41 PM
You used a Jan twist to perfection... Love it..
Allison Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 2:38 AM
Are you saying I'm a bit warped Tim?!!! Hugs Jan x
Nance Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 4:24 PM
Wow, you have impressed me yet again my friend, this is fantastic! a 7 and fav for me :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 3:49 PM
Gosh, this one is so unusual from you. Rhyming couplets form and also the subject matter. I am guessing it has to be metaphorical. It's very creative! The last part makes me think of someone in prison. Whether this is your reality or not, I think many of us can feel that our lives have become like a prison. Sure enjoyed your imagery in this one, Maurice.
Allison Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 12:54 PM
wonderful imagery Maurice - such a deep sad ending though. Hugs Jan xxx good luck in the contest. xx
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