Yesterday's Fragile Truth

Betrayal devastates your trusting heart, severing the bonds of love from the start. And depression slowly entraps your soul, as disparaging lies exact their toll. Chameleon clouds change to match your mood, releasing teardrops, sad emotions brewed. And at the crossroads of sane and insane, your heart breaks, under the weight of your pain. A fickle Sun no longer shares its light, sulking in the shadows, gathered by Night. And feigning feelings, you struggle to cope, for a broken heart cannot harbor Hope. At the end of the tunnel, there's no light, everything appears dark: obscured by fright: And the specter of fear festers in dreams; fueling night terrors and silent screams. The promise of tomorrow made to youth was written on yesterday's fragile truth. And like a vino, decanted in haste, love's a premature wine with a sour taste.
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Theraven Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 6:16 PM
Emile, I searched for this poem in your book 'Navigating The Backwaters Of My Mind'. This moment without weight remains. Still happy to find it. -Richard
Pinet Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 8:20 PM
Thanks Richard, you can find this poem in my book "Scattered Thoughts" page 275, I'm glad you liked it my friend, Emile.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 8:54 AM
This is a good look back at your talented pen Emile. Well done!
Pinet Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 9:18 AM
Thanks Richard, I appreciate your kind comments my friend, Emile.
Gentry Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 9:34 PM
Congratulations on your win! Such a great poem that we all can relate to, written so tenderly too. :)
Pett Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 11:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Emile, excellent write sad and beautifully written. :))
Pinet Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 1:20 PM
Thanks Roy, I appreciate your kind comments my friend, Emile.
Gentile Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 7:44 AM
Congratulations on your marvelous placement Emile Well Done xxoo
Pinet Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 7:56 AM
Thanks Mike, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 7:00 AM
Back with congrats on your top win, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 7:18 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Cunningham Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 2:21 AM
Congratulations Emile. Tom.
Gauthier Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 7:32 PM
Back with congrats on your win, Emile. Sad that "For happiness is a word without weight, it's simply a moment devoid of hate"... Well written.
Pinet Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:13 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Ashley Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 8:07 PM
Returning with congratulations Emile, for your excellent win with your passionate and sad poem that moves me with ease through your poetic line with lovely rhythm and rhymes..
Pinet Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:35 AM
Thanks Susan, I truly appreciate your support. Emile.
Roper Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 6:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Pinet Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 6:55 PM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Scars Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 11:04 AM
beautiful Emile, perfect rhythm and rhyme! thank you and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Pinet Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 11:33 AM
Thanks so much Laura, I appreciate both the placement and the comments my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 11:18 PM
Congratulations on your win,Emile! Great choice for the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
Pinet Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 8:34 AM
Thanks Eve, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Ashley Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 6:12 PM
Emile, your passionate poem sadly expresses the bitter pain and heartbreak that betrayal brings. A powerful and emotional write that captivated me. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
Pinet Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 8:34 AM
Thanks Susan, as always, your comments are welcome my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 9:04 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Emile. Betrayal is certainly the worst.
Pinet Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 9:33 AM
Thanks Line, as always your comments and support are most welcome my friend, Emile.
One Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 4:00 PM
No betrayal worse than cheating, yet so many are vitim of this.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, I am happy you entered and the poem will be showcased..
Pinet Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Thanks for the placement in your contest, you honor me my friend, Emile.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 22, 2017 at 1:33 PM
Emile,the truth hurts when your spouse cheats on you. It is a betrayal of the marriage,this pain hurts.Ask the question if he cheated, he says nothing looks guilty. you know.It is a good marriage that has gone wrong somehow. That hurts. Marriage vows broken.So sad.
Pinet Avatar
May 22, 2017 at 5:35 PM
Thanks Darlene, as always, your comments are welcome my friend, Emile.
Turner Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 4:43 PM
Sounds like the voice of experience. Masterfully written, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 11:03 AM
Thanks Daniel, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Bateman Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 12:03 PM
Hello Emile, Congratulations on your wondrous poem here making the Best New Poems list. This one's packed with passion and emotion, and is extraordinarily powerful. Most Excellent!! SEVEN/FAVE my friend!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Pinet Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 3:49 PM
Thanks Gary, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Duet Avatar
May 10, 2017 at 2:02 PM
Wow! Andd congrats on making the Best New Poems list too.
Pinet Avatar
May 10, 2017 at 4:19 PM
Thanks Carole, I truly appreciate your support. Emile.
Duet Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 3:38 PM
Back to congratulate you on your placement in the contest, Emile. Not surprised.
Pinet Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 7:05 PM
Thanks Carole, I appreciate it, Emile.
Walker Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 8:42 PM
Your words are so captivating, the feeling expressed to clearly. Sad and so true, you penned these feelings with vivid insight. Wonderful !
Pinet Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 9:57 AM
Thanks so much Lenna, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Dew Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 2:56 PM
Heart-wrenching..
Pinet Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 9:57 AM
Thanks Pin, I appreciate your support, Emile.
Snyder Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 2:32 PM
sorry for yor sad, nice write Emile
Pinet Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 2:46 PM
Thanks Edward, I appreciate your support, Emile.
Cp Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 2:12 AM
This is so beautiful! Your poetry inspires me a lot. Cp
Pinet Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 8:48 AM
Thanks Collins, I appreciate your friendly comments, Emile.
Krampe Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 1:25 PM
Coming back with congrats - happy to see this on the winners list.
Pinet Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 4:01 PM
Thanks Agnes, your friendly words have made my day brighter, Emile.
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