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Betrayal has devastated your heart blocking love’s magic before it could start. And depression's quagmire entraps your soul as disparaging lies exact their toll. Chameleon clouds change to match your mood releasing teardrops emotions have brewed. And your heart breaks from the weight of the pain as monsters hide in the thoughts of the sane. A fickle sun no longer shares its light sulking within shadows gathered by night. And feigning feelings you struggle to cope for counterfeit smiles leave no room for hope. The specter of fear that penetrates dreams fuels frightening bouts of silent screams. And exiting the tunnel there’s no light for the future’s foggy obscured by fright. The promise of tomorrow made to youth was written on yesterday’s fragile truth. For happiness is a word without weight it's simply a moment devoid of hate. (Rhyme) 4/22/2017

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Date: 6/23/2018 9:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Such a great poem that we all can relate to, written so tenderly too. :)
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Date: 6/21/2018 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Emile, excellent write sad and beautifully written. :))
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Date: 6/21/2018 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Roy, I appreciate your kind comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/21/2018 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your marvelous placement Emile Well Done xxoo
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Date: 6/21/2018 7:56:00 AM
Thanks Mike, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/21/2018 7:00:00 AM
Back with congrats on your top win, Emile.
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Date: 6/21/2018 7:18:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/21/2018 2:21:00 AM
Congratulations Emile. Tom.
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Date: 3/2/2018 7:32:00 PM
Back with congrats on your win, Emile. Sad that "For happiness is a word without weight, it's simply a moment devoid of hate"... Well written.
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:13:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 2/28/2018 8:07:00 PM
Returning with congratulations Emile, for your excellent win with your passionate and sad poem that moves me with ease through your poetic line with lovely rhythm and rhymes..
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Date: 3/1/2018 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I truly appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 2/28/2018 6:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/28/2018 6:55:00 PM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/28/2018 11:04:00 AM
beautiful Emile, perfect rhythm and rhyme! thank you and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 2/28/2018 11:33:00 AM
Thanks so much Laura, I appreciate both the placement and the comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/8/2018 11:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Emile! Great choice for the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/9/2018 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Eve, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/8/2018 6:12:00 PM
Emile, your passionate poem sadly expresses the bitter pain and heartbreak that betrayal brings. A powerful and emotional write that captivated me. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 2/9/2018 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Susan, as always, your comments are welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/5/2018 9:04:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Emile. Betrayal is certainly the worst.
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Date: 2/6/2018 9:33:00 AM
Thanks Line, as always your comments and support are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/5/2018 4:00:00 PM
No betrayal worse than cheating, yet so many are vitim of this.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, I am happy you entered and the poem will be showcased..
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Date: 2/5/2018 4:54:00 PM
Thanks for the placement in your contest, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/22/2017 1:33:00 PM
Emile,the truth hurts when your spouse cheats on you. It is a betrayal of the marriage,this pain hurts.Ask the question if he cheated, he says nothing looks guilty. you know.It is a good marriage that has gone wrong somehow. That hurts. Marriage vows broken.So sad.
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Date: 5/22/2017 5:35:00 PM
Thanks Darlene, as always, your comments are welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/15/2017 4:43:00 PM
Sounds like the voice of experience. Masterfully written, Emile.
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Date: 5/16/2017 11:03:00 AM
Thanks Daniel, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/12/2017 12:03:00 PM
Hello Emile, Congratulations on your wondrous poem here making the Best New Poems list. This one's packed with passion and emotion, and is extraordinarily powerful. Most Excellent!! SEVEN/FAVE my friend!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 5/12/2017 3:49:00 PM
Thanks Gary, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/10/2017 2:02:00 PM
Wow! Andd congrats on making the Best New Poems list too.
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Date: 5/10/2017 4:19:00 PM
Thanks Carole, I truly appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 5/5/2017 3:38:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your placement in the contest, Emile. Not surprised.
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Date: 5/5/2017 7:05:00 PM
Thanks Carole, I appreciate it, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2017 8:42:00 PM
Your words are so captivating, the feeling expressed to clearly. Sad and so true, you penned these feelings with vivid insight. Wonderful !
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Date: 5/4/2017 9:57:00 AM
Thanks so much Lenna, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2017 2:56:00 PM
Heart-wrenching..
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Date: 5/4/2017 9:57:00 AM
Thanks Pin, I appreciate your support, Emile.
Date: 5/2/2017 2:32:00 PM
sorry for yor sad, nice write Emile
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Date: 5/2/2017 2:46:00 PM
Thanks Edward, I appreciate your support, Emile.
Date: 5/1/2017 1:10:00 PM
Those words, "depression's quagmire" really jumped out at me. I've been there, and I'm thankful to not be in that place anymore. Congratulations on placing in the contest. :-)
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Date: 5/1/2017 5:17:00 PM
Thanks Carol, your friendly words have made my day brighter, Emile.
Date: 5/1/2017 2:12:00 AM
This is so beautiful! Your poetry inspires me a lot. Cp
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Date: 5/1/2017 8:48:00 AM
Thanks Collins, I appreciate your friendly comments, Emile.
Date: 4/30/2017 1:25:00 PM
Coming back with congrats - happy to see this on the winners list.
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Date: 4/30/2017 4:01:00 PM
Thanks Agnes, your friendly words have made my day brighter, Emile.
Date: 4/28/2017 2:33:00 PM
This is a sad written poem.I enjoyed reading it. So you know I had tears in my eyes as I was reading it.
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Date: 4/28/2017 5:40:00 PM
Thanks so much Darlene, your comments are welcome and your support is appreciated, Emile.
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