Yesterday's Fragile Truth

Betrayal devastates your trusting heart, severing the bonds of love from the start. And depression slowly entraps your soul; for disparaging lies exact their toll. Chameleon clouds change to match your mood by releasing tears, sad emotions brewed. And at the crossroads of sane and insane, your heart breaks under the weight of your pain. A fickle Sun no longer shares its light, sulking within shadows gathered by Night. And feigning feelings, you struggle to cope, for a broken heart cannot harbor Hope. The specter of fear festering in dreams; fuels frightening bouts of silent screams. And at the end of the tunnel, no light, the future is opaque, obscured by fright. The promise of tomorrow made to youth was written on yesterday's fragile truth. And happiness is a wine without weight; simply a bouquet decanted by fate.

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Date: 6/26/2021 6:16:00 PM
Emile, I searched for this poem in your book 'Navigating The Backwaters Of My Mind'. This moment without weight remains. Still happy to find it. -Richard
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Date: 6/26/2021 8:20:00 PM
Thanks Richard, you can find this poem in my book "Scattered Thoughts" page 275, I'm glad you liked it my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/10/2020 8:54:00 AM
This is a good look back at your talented pen Emile. Well done!
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Date: 2/10/2020 9:18:00 AM
Thanks Richard, I appreciate your kind comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/23/2018 9:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Such a great poem that we all can relate to, written so tenderly too. :)
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Date: 6/21/2018 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Emile, excellent write sad and beautifully written. :))
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Date: 6/21/2018 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Roy, I appreciate your kind comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/21/2018 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your marvelous placement Emile Well Done xxoo
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Date: 6/21/2018 7:56:00 AM
Thanks Mike, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/21/2018 7:00:00 AM
Back with congrats on your top win, Emile.
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Date: 6/21/2018 7:18:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/21/2018 2:21:00 AM
Congratulations Emile. Tom.
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Date: 3/2/2018 7:32:00 PM
Back with congrats on your win, Emile. Sad that "For happiness is a word without weight, it's simply a moment devoid of hate"... Well written.
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:13:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 2/28/2018 8:07:00 PM
Returning with congratulations Emile, for your excellent win with your passionate and sad poem that moves me with ease through your poetic line with lovely rhythm and rhymes..
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Date: 3/1/2018 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I truly appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 2/28/2018 6:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/28/2018 6:55:00 PM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/28/2018 11:04:00 AM
beautiful Emile, perfect rhythm and rhyme! thank you and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 2/28/2018 11:33:00 AM
Thanks so much Laura, I appreciate both the placement and the comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/8/2018 11:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Emile! Great choice for the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/9/2018 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Eve, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/8/2018 6:12:00 PM
Emile, your passionate poem sadly expresses the bitter pain and heartbreak that betrayal brings. A powerful and emotional write that captivated me. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 2/9/2018 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Susan, as always, your comments are welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/5/2018 9:04:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Emile. Betrayal is certainly the worst.
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Date: 2/6/2018 9:33:00 AM
Thanks Line, as always your comments and support are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/5/2018 4:00:00 PM
No betrayal worse than cheating, yet so many are vitim of this.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, I am happy you entered and the poem will be showcased..
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Date: 2/5/2018 4:54:00 PM
Thanks for the placement in your contest, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/22/2017 1:33:00 PM
Emile,the truth hurts when your spouse cheats on you. It is a betrayal of the marriage,this pain hurts.Ask the question if he cheated, he says nothing looks guilty. you know.It is a good marriage that has gone wrong somehow. That hurts. Marriage vows broken.So sad.
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Date: 5/22/2017 5:35:00 PM
Thanks Darlene, as always, your comments are welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/15/2017 4:43:00 PM
Sounds like the voice of experience. Masterfully written, Emile.
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Date: 5/16/2017 11:03:00 AM
Thanks Daniel, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/12/2017 12:03:00 PM
Hello Emile, Congratulations on your wondrous poem here making the Best New Poems list. This one's packed with passion and emotion, and is extraordinarily powerful. Most Excellent!! SEVEN/FAVE my friend!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 5/12/2017 3:49:00 PM
Thanks Gary, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/10/2017 2:02:00 PM
Wow! Andd congrats on making the Best New Poems list too.
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Date: 5/10/2017 4:19:00 PM
Thanks Carole, I truly appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 5/5/2017 3:38:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your placement in the contest, Emile. Not surprised.
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Date: 5/5/2017 7:05:00 PM
Thanks Carole, I appreciate it, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2017 8:42:00 PM
Your words are so captivating, the feeling expressed to clearly. Sad and so true, you penned these feelings with vivid insight. Wonderful !
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Date: 5/4/2017 9:57:00 AM
Thanks so much Lenna, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2017 2:56:00 PM
Heart-wrenching..
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Date: 5/4/2017 9:57:00 AM
Thanks Pin, I appreciate your support, Emile.
Date: 5/2/2017 2:32:00 PM
sorry for yor sad, nice write Emile
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Date: 5/2/2017 2:46:00 PM
Thanks Edward, I appreciate your support, Emile.
Date: 5/1/2017 2:12:00 AM
This is so beautiful! Your poetry inspires me a lot. Cp
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Date: 5/1/2017 8:48:00 AM
Thanks Collins, I appreciate your friendly comments, Emile.
Date: 4/30/2017 1:25:00 PM
Coming back with congrats - happy to see this on the winners list.
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Date: 4/30/2017 4:01:00 PM
Thanks Agnes, your friendly words have made my day brighter, Emile.
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