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Yes, I Did

Yes, I D.I.D. (U) Ok? (F) So I don’t think the same (F) -not a bit (P) should I be feeling shame? (C) should I stop thinking? (C) should I just quit? (C) I’m not sure why it’s a problem (M) You can try to break my mind (F) restructure, reshape (M) unspool and rewind (M) spread the cracks, make them gape (W) but it won’t make me any better (F) Some things I may say – you can’t comprehend (M) I know they can’t be real (F) but please, just pretend (P) for my sake (W) It will be difficult (F) and seem impossible (M) but I’m not all gone yet (P) I still maintain a slight grip on reality (Ma) while my imagination remains indocible (C) Pray for me, I am ill (Ma) I have a worsening case of “instability” (M) I’m split (W) hallucinations are plenty, emotions are scattered (F) pray for me before I become nil (Ma) Unknown - the original person (U) Frederick – logical, condescending, sarcastic, realist (F) Melissa – emotional, understanding, poetic, imaginative (M) Catherine – angry, defiant (C) William – childish, violent, selfish (W) Marian – religious, passive, melodramatic (Ma) Paul – shy, undermined by the others (P)

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