Yes, I Am Poet

Yes, I am a poet
A metaphor to the universe
A moment of spirit
Out of flesh, the first converse
Of reality ... the prophet
Writing history
Struggling in the net
Of a butterflies vanity.
Look out
I make webs too
Using pen for pipe and mouth
So ancient ... I struggle to be new.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 9:01 PM
much to discover here! L'nass! good poem! jimbo
Strand Avatar
December 16, 2009 at 12:23 AM
You are indeed L'nass.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments and valued insightful critiques.
Haick Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 11:19 AM
Aah!...Struggling in the net of a butterfly's vanity..." You are a poet, indeed. Great job, friend. Peace and love, audrey
Richards Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 8:37 AM
Yes again and again...you are!
Ryerson Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 8:06 AM
So much said here in just a few lines...sign of a good poem. Love the last one especially! - Tim
Kendrick Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 7:32 AM
Saying something that has never been said is miraculous. Keep the magical pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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