Yes, I Am Poet

Yes, I am a poet
A metaphor to the universe
A moment of spirit
Out of flesh, the first converse
Of reality ... the prophet
Writing history
Struggling in the net
Of a butterflies vanity.
Look out
I make webs too
Using pen for pipe and mouth
So ancient ... I struggle to be new.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 12/19/2009 9:01:00 PM
much to discover here! L'nass! good poem! jimbo
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Date: 12/16/2009 12:23:00 AM
You are indeed L'nass.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments and valued insightful critiques.
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Date: 12/15/2009 11:19:00 AM
Aah!...Struggling in the net of a butterfly's vanity..." You are a poet, indeed. Great job, friend. Peace and love, audrey
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Date: 12/15/2009 8:37:00 AM
Yes again and again...you are!
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Date: 12/15/2009 8:06:00 AM
So much said here in just a few lines...sign of a good poem. Love the last one especially! - Tim
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Date: 12/15/2009 7:32:00 AM
Saying something that has never been said is miraculous. Keep the magical pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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