Yes?

Talking to the girl I love
Thinking what she'd say
Laying in bed about to pray
Hopeing she'll say yes 
To the question I asked
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 3:54 PM
What an excellent poem. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
September 7, 2009 at 7:19 PM
not the answer i was lookin for but ill live with it
H. Avatar
September 7, 2009 at 6:54 PM
I hope she makes the right choice... jen
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