C.N. Vunc Poet Ghazal

Yellow Tulips

There is sunshine in your smile, my love
Though I do keep asking myself, "why love?"

All this pain when I have little to gain
In my heart all I can do is sigh, love

Your lovely presence makes me feel pleasant
And thoughts of you makes me want to fly, love

Reality hits me and thus I flee
Your refusal makes me want to cry, love

I remember times we were together
That is all it takes to make me high, love

Hold in my heart what we had from the start
All the way until the day I die, love

These thoughts I keep it, hold it in secret
Hopeless love, I bid farewell, good-bye, love

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Sheri Fresonke Harper November 17, 2013 at 7:33 PM CN VunC, lovely romantic ghazal, Congratulations on your win. C.N. Vunc November 18, 2013 at 6:13 AM Thank you for reading my piece and you kind words Sheri

Skat A November 15, 2013 at 11:13 AM C N, Congratulations, on your 'Take the Leap' win............ LOVE ~ SKAT ~ C.N. Vunc November 18, 2013 at 6:12 AM Thanks for coming by again Skat

Sandra Adams November 13, 2013 at 11:25 AM nicely penned...congrats on your win :) C.N. Vunc November 18, 2013 at 6:12 AM Thank you for your kind words

Juliet Ligon November 12, 2013 at 9:55 PM Nice. Congrats, C.N. C.N. Vunc November 18, 2013 at 6:11 AM Thank you Juliet

Dr.Ram Mehta November 12, 2013 at 3:19 AM Congratulations on the win, C.N. C.N. Vunc November 18, 2013 at 6:11 AM Thank you for your congratulations

Arden Gopela November 11, 2013 at 8:47 AM This one's wonderful, C.N. Welcome to poetrysoup! All the best my souper-friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den C.N. Vunc November 18, 2013 at 6:10 AM Thank you Den for your welcome

Susan Palli November 11, 2013 at 7:58 AM So much emotional pain! We'll written! We can look forward to a new world without pain and suffering! Check out Revelation 21:3,4 in the bible C.N. Vunc November 18, 2013 at 6:10 AM Thank you Susan for your insight

Nikhileswari Swaminathan November 11, 2013 at 5:42 AM A lovely write its true love can be so painful C.N. Vunc November 18, 2013 at 6:10 AM Through pain we hope to grow. Thank you for your kind words.

Skat A November 8, 2013 at 11:36 AM Love the form in this C.N., , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT C.N. Vunc November 9, 2013 at 7:59 AM Hi SKAT, thanks for the warm welcome. I do hope you enjoyed my poem.

Kiran Bantawa November 8, 2013 at 6:42 AM nice ghazal. C.N. Vunc November 8, 2013 at 7:32 AM Thank you for you feed back, its much appreciated

Poet Destroyer A November 8, 2013 at 6:10 AM your poem is deep and lovely, CN.-A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@ C.N. Vunc November 8, 2013 at 7:32 AM Thank you for your feedback, I really appreciate it. Will definitely try to get something together for your contest in time, cheers, CN

Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2013 at 4:29 AM - Welcome to P-Soup, C.N. ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :) C.N. Vunc November 8, 2013 at 7:30 AM Thank you very much for your welcome.