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Yellow Tulips

There is sunshine in your smile, my love
Though I do keep asking myself, "why love?"

All this pain when I have little to gain
In my heart all I can do is sigh, love

Your lovely presence makes me feel pleasant
And thoughts of you makes me want to fly, love

Reality hits me and thus I flee
Your refusal makes me want to cry, love

I remember times we were together
That is all it takes to make me high, love

Hold in my heart what we had from the start
All the way until the day I die, love

These thoughts I keep it, hold it in secret
Hopeless love, I bid farewell, good-bye, love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/17/2013 7:33:00 PM
CN VunC, lovely romantic ghazal, Congratulations on your win.
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C.N. VunC
Date: 11/18/2013 6:13:00 AM
Thank you for reading my piece and you kind words Sheri
Date: 11/15/2013 11:13:00 AM
C N, Congratulations, on your 'Take the Leap' win............ LOVE ~ SKAT ~
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C.N. VunC
Date: 11/18/2013 6:12:00 AM
Thanks for coming by again Skat
Date: 11/13/2013 11:25:00 AM
nicely penned...congrats on your win :)
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C.N. VunC
Date: 11/18/2013 6:12:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words
Date: 11/12/2013 9:55:00 PM
Nice. Congrats, C.N.
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C.N. VunC
Date: 11/18/2013 6:11:00 AM
Thank you Juliet
Date: 11/12/2013 3:19:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, C.N.
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C.N. VunC
Date: 11/18/2013 6:11:00 AM
Thank you for your congratulations
Date: 11/11/2013 8:47:00 AM
This one's wonderful, C.N. Welcome to poetrysoup! All the best my souper-friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
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C.N. VunC
Date: 11/18/2013 6:10:00 AM
Thank you Den for your welcome
Date: 11/11/2013 7:58:00 AM
So much emotional pain! We'll written! We can look forward to a new world without pain and suffering! Check out Revelation 21:3,4 in the bible
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C.N. VunC
Date: 11/18/2013 6:10:00 AM
Thank you Susan for your insight
Date: 11/11/2013 5:42:00 AM
A lovely write its true love can be so painful
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C.N. VunC
Date: 11/18/2013 6:10:00 AM
Through pain we hope to grow. Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 11/8/2013 11:36:00 AM
Love the form in this C.N., , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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C.N. VunC
Date: 11/9/2013 7:59:00 AM
Hi SKAT, thanks for the warm welcome. I do hope you enjoyed my poem.
Date: 11/8/2013 6:42:00 AM
nice ghazal.
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C.N. VunC
Date: 11/8/2013 7:32:00 AM
Thank you for you feed back, its much appreciated
Date: 11/8/2013 6:10:00 AM
your poem is deep and lovely, CN.-A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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C.N. VunC
Date: 11/8/2013 7:32:00 AM
Thank you for your feedback, I really appreciate it. Will definitely try to get something together for your contest in time, cheers, CN
Date: 11/8/2013 4:29:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, C.N. ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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C.N. VunC
Date: 11/8/2013 7:30:00 AM
Thank you very much for your welcome.