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Yellow Sapphire

Onyx of darkness crumbled beneath my bed, I lit a bead in fiery scarlet hues on a novel white canvas A fire enraged in the hollows of anxieties Oh my precious canvas burnt in raging flames The bead from the canvas somersaulted in my room Hallucinations of muddled cobwebs entangled me It whirled and swooshed my fears in numbness My drooping desires curled into creeping snails, It flashed visions from black to topaz blue Ruby for a while then emerald oh then amethyst Lit the world with fireworks of hope in the moonlit sky The reasons to die, the desires to live, dancing chaos Ashes of my canvas scattered around in the morning, My brush dipped in blood red fears-- yellow sapphire gleaming in my palm June 12, 2020 Sleepless - Old or New Poetry Contest Sponsor: Carolyn Devonshire ~Winner: 2nd Place BRIAN'S select E,any form,any theme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand ~Winner: 3rd Place

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Date: 6/17/2020 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations for your win for this excellent verse, Aditi! I'm honored to share 2d place win with you. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H
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Date: 6/17/2020 12:33:00 PM
That's a really generous appreciation Robert :) I am thankful for your visit and encouragement. God bless you :)
Date: 6/17/2020 9:20:00 AM
Aditi, congratulations on your win with this vividly descriptive piece! Janice
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Date: 6/17/2020 9:21:00 AM
Thank you for your gracious words Janice. God bless you :)
Date: 6/17/2020 8:49:00 AM
Very nicely penned Adita, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 6/17/2020 9:21:00 AM
Thank you for your kind wishes Joseph. God bless you :)
Date: 6/16/2020 3:04:00 PM
I am happy to see this wonderful poem on the winners list Aditi. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/17/2020 3:55:00 AM
Thank you for your gracious words dear Connie. You are always kind to me. Blessed to be appreciated by you. Much love and blessings :)
Date: 6/16/2020 1:24:00 PM
Adita, I collect jewelry and loved the way you worked all the gemstones into your beautiful descriptions. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 6/17/2020 3:55:00 AM
I am really amazed and glad to know you collect jewelry dear Carolyn. It has always amazed me though I am no good at it. Glad you loved the references. Thank you for such kind words of appreciation. Blessings and love :) ~Aditi
Date: 6/15/2020 7:30:00 AM
This is brilliant. I feel blessed coming across this page. You have it in you, I will definitely come visiting again to enjoy the blessing of your deep mind. A great piece!
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Date: 6/15/2020 9:11:00 AM
So glad you love my words. Blessed by your constant support and encouragement. Thank you for your appreciating words my friend. God bless you :)
Date: 6/14/2020 4:42:00 AM
Brilliant flames ...
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Date: 6/14/2020 5:52:00 AM
Thank you for your gracious appreciation Kai. Blessings. Take care :)
Date: 6/14/2020 1:28:00 AM
My drooping desires curled into creeping snails..Lovely poem Aditi.. Good luck in the contest..
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Date: 6/14/2020 5:51:00 AM
Thank you for your wonderful blessings Jenish. Always a pleasure to be appreciated by you. God bless you :)
Date: 6/13/2020 10:28:00 PM
A dive into the deep waters of mystery. Brilliant writing Aditi! This lovely poem should score high. I don't know how you find the time to write so many wonderful poems. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/14/2020 5:51:00 AM
So glad you find it beautiful Connie :) Thank you for your generous wishes and blessings. I believe I am involving myself into writing after work too much these days. Much love to you :)
Date: 6/13/2020 3:25:00 PM
Lovely penning Aditi, good imagery and expression. Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 6/13/2020 5:40:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely words of appreciation Gordon. God bless you :)
Date: 6/13/2020 5:09:00 AM
Brilliant write my friend...keep up the great work Aditi...poetic hugs...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 6/13/2020 5:12:00 AM
Honored to be appreciated by you dear Wingster :) Thank you for your blessed words. Blessings and hugs ^_^
Date: 6/13/2020 4:55:00 AM
Great work ! :-) Checkout my soupmail
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Date: 6/13/2020 5:05:00 AM
Thanks for your appreciation Sahil :)
Date: 6/12/2020 8:52:00 PM
I absolutely adore this poetic gem Aditi! A FAVE for me! More power on your pen!
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Date: 6/13/2020 1:05:00 AM
Oh thank you so much for the fave and for your blessed words of appreciation. Much love :)
Date: 6/12/2020 5:58:00 PM
Love this poem, Aditi! To me it sounds mysterious with a lot of underlying, deep meanings. Your poems make me think! Best wishes, always.
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Date: 6/13/2020 1:05:00 AM
Blessed by your gracious words of appreciation Mala! Thank you for taking your time to read and encourage my muse. Much love and blessings :)

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