Yellow Light

yellow light flickers

    from candles grouped together

            ... the storm rages on
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
December 20, 2012 at 7:10 AM
you have painted a very emotive and expressive scene..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for stoppin by my blog..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 4:43 PM
Clicked on this one to see if I'd commented to it yet. And I saw my comment to you on the older actress from FActs of Life. I was really happy she won the audience favorite. What a lovely person she showed herself to be on Survivor. Are you happy Denise won? I was a bit surprised, but pleasantly so.
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 11:28 PM
VERY Nice one here. yep, Boston Rob was something else. So who do you want to win THIS survivor? I am kind of partial to the older actress. Does nobody know who she is yet?
La France Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 7:27 AM
Francine, a beautiful crafted haiku, so visual, Constance
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 10:09 AM
Like this one Francine, I am just starting my journey(maybe) into haiku.xx
Singleton Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 7:09 PM
Hi Francine, love your little write :)
A   Avatar
November 23, 2012 at 8:47 AM
Francine...wow...love the flickering image.... almost like lightning...luv...pd
Collins Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 7:45 AM
Hi Francine - this is a great original picture. Cannot be said of the aftermath. love, Kathy
Guzzi Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 2:27 PM
an evocative haiku!! I particualry like how the storms rage is felt through the use of the word FLICKER! Happy Thanks Giving Light & Love
Palmer Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 10:42 AM
great write thanks for this Haiku form getting the hang of it,nice write Francine
Mannan Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 1:20 AM
Gorgeous image in this haiku Francine.
Andresen Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 3:04 PM
You can borrow mine: "Light In The Darkness" - Well written Haiku, Francine. - Have a nice Sunday evening. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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