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Yellow Light

yellow light flickers from candles grouped together ... the storm rages on

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/20/2012 7:10:00 AM
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you have painted a very emotive and expressive scene..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for stoppin by my blog..Sara
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/19/2012 4:43:00 PM
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Clicked on this one to see if I'd commented to it yet. And I saw my comment to you on the older actress from FActs of Life. I was really happy she won the audience favorite. What a lovely person she showed herself to be on Survivor. Are you happy Denise won? I was a bit surprised, but pleasantly so.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/7/2012 11:28:00 PM
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VERY Nice one here. yep, Boston Rob was something else. So who do you want to win THIS survivor? I am kind of partial to the older actress. Does nobody know who she is yet?
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Constance La France
Date: 11/28/2012 7:27:00 AM
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Francine, a beautiful crafted haiku, so visual, Constance
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/25/2012 10:09:00 AM
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Like this one Francine, I am just starting my journey(maybe) into haiku.xx
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Kerry Singleton
Date: 11/24/2012 7:09:00 PM
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Hi Francine, love your little write :)
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Date: 11/23/2012 8:47:00 AM
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Francine...wow...love the flickering image.... almost like lightning...luv...pd
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 11/22/2012 7:45:00 AM
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Hi Francine - this is a great original picture. Cannot be said of the aftermath. love, Kathy
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/21/2012 2:27:00 PM
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an evocative haiku!! I particualry like how the storms rage is felt through the use of the word FLICKER! Happy Thanks Giving Light & Love
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/21/2012 10:42:00 AM
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great write thanks for this Haiku form getting the hang of it,nice write Francine
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Tahera Mannan
Date: 11/19/2012 1:20:00 AM
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Gorgeous image in this haiku Francine.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/18/2012 3:04:00 PM
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You can borrow mine: "Light In The Darkness" - Well written Haiku, Francine. - Have a nice Sunday evening. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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