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Yellow Lashes

bright yellow lashes embellish enormous eye- sunflower beauty August 23, 2020 Premiere Contest: Haiku- Color With Alliteration Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Valerie Staton

Date: 9/16/2020 7:55:00 PM

I see it so clearly! A wonderful write. Your imagery was on point!

Sharon Keely

Date: 9/12/2020 7:25:00 AM

You've given me a whole new way to see sunflowers - thank you!

Warren Doll

Date: 8/29/2020 11:54:00 AM

Sandra, such a unique haiku. Congratulations on 1st place~ Warren

David Holmes

Date: 8/28/2020 11:55:00 AM

Sandra - congratulations on your win - a wonderful Haiku. David

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/27/2020 2:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I love sunflowers and their beauty. A beautiful write. Enjoy your win and day.................

Susan Woodrow

Date: 8/27/2020 8:51:00 AM

a gorgeous win! love it :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/27/2020 8:48:00 AM

I adored this the first time I ready it Sandra, many congrats on your trophy win:-) hugs jan xx

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/27/2020 6:43:00 AM

Gorgeous ku! Congratulations on your top win Sandra! A fave for me :))) xomo!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/27/2020 6:23:00 AM

Sandra, congratulations on your trophy win, love this haiku, beautiful and creative imagery, I will think of this when I see sunflowers now!

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 8/23/2020 7:48:00 PM

Super cool! A warm connection evoked by your tribute our plentiful friend, Sunflower.

Jenna Logan

Date: 8/23/2020 1:50:00 PM

The resemblance to a face is glorious, Sandra.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/23/2020 1:00:00 PM

simply stunning Sandra!:-) hugs jan xx