Premiere Contest WinnerYellow Lashes

bright yellow lashes
embellish enormous eye-
sunflower beauty


August 23, 2020

Premiere Contest: Haiku- Color With Alliteration
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
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Staton Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 7:55 PM
I see it so clearly! A wonderful write. Your imagery was on point!
Keely Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 7:25 AM
You've given me a whole new way to see sunflowers - thank you!
Doll Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 11:54 AM
Sandra, such a unique haiku. Congratulations on 1st place~ Warren
Holmes Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 11:55 AM
Sandra - congratulations on your win - a wonderful Haiku. David
Goldsmith Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 2:52 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love sunflowers and their beauty. A beautiful write. Enjoy your win and day.................
Woodrow Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 8:51 AM
a gorgeous win! love it :)
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 8:48 AM
I adored this the first time I ready it Sandra, many congrats on your trophy win:-) hugs jan xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 6:43 AM
Gorgeous ku! Congratulations on your top win Sandra! A fave for me :))) xomo!
Kitchin Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 6:23 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your trophy win, love this haiku, beautiful and creative imagery, I will think of this when I see sunflowers now!
Ermine Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 7:48 PM
Super cool! A warm connection evoked by your tribute our plentiful friend, Sunflower.
Logan Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 1:50 PM
The resemblance to a face is glorious, Sandra.
Allison Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 1:00 PM
simply stunning Sandra!:-) hugs jan xx
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