Carol Mitra Poet Tetractys

Yellow Gold

Blushing like new brides lifting their faces
Sunflowers like
Glowing Blooms
In fields
Dance
And
Sway with
Gentle Breeze
Towards the sun
The whole circle now solid yellow gold.

Double Tetrachys
23.09.2020

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Sam Kauffman September 23, 2020 at 12:51 PM Glowing, happy words that picture the sunflower's brightness, Carol. This is a beautiful picture that makes me feel warm all over. Love your opening line. Nice take on the theme. Best wishes in the contest. Carol Mitra September 23, 2020 at 7:31 PM Thanks Sam....took this theme....and in the end it coverts into a gold wedding ring....or a gold band of the sun and flowers:)