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Yellow Gold

Blushing like new brides lifting their faces Sunflowers like Glowing Blooms In fields Dance And Sway with Gentle Breeze Towards the sun The whole circle now solid yellow gold. Double Tetrachys 23.09.2020

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/23/2020 12:51:00 PM

Glowing, happy words that picture the sunflower's brightness, Carol. This is a beautiful picture that makes me feel warm all over. Love your opening line. Nice take on the theme. Best wishes in the contest.

Carol Mitra
Date: 9/23/2020 7:31:00 PM

Thanks Sam....took this theme....and in the end it coverts into a gold wedding ring....or a gold band of the sun and flowers:)