Heidi Sands Poet Personification

Yellow Eye

I’m a simple white daisy
In a world that’s rough
I don’t have thorns
I am not tough
I see with my yellow eye
The smiles passing by
Wishes, upon wishes, I try
To brighten the day
Keep the smiles alive
Without a word to say
I’m a simple white daisy

Heidi Sands

7/3/19

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Caren Krutsinger July 6, 2019 at 6:01 AM You have brought to life a real person who knows herself, and is probably naive, and truthful and innocent. Love it! Heidi Sands July 6, 2019 at 6:39 AM Thank you Caren :)

Richard Lamoureux July 5, 2019 at 9:27 AM I feel bad for the humble daisy, lovers rip it petal from petal. I enjoyed this sweet piece. It is hard not to smile when looking at a daisy. Heidi Sands July 5, 2019 at 3:57 PM That is true. Hard not to smile looking at one. Thank you Richard! :)

Darlene De Beaulieu July 4, 2019 at 7:09 PM hello Heidi, the Daisy is a beautiful flower. On a dull day a daisy brightens the day, have a nice evening my friend. Heidi Sands July 5, 2019 at 8:11 AM That's true, the daisy brightens the day. Thank you Darlene :)

Susan Ashley July 4, 2019 at 7:01 PM Indeed, daisies do spread smiles as does this beautiful poem, Heidi. Wonderfully done! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Heidi Sands July 5, 2019 at 8:11 AM Thank you Susan :)

Gary Smith July 4, 2019 at 3:31 PM A lovely poem Heidi. :) Heidi Sands July 4, 2019 at 6:38 PM Thank you Gary :)

Nette Onclaud July 4, 2019 at 3:10 PM sweetening the page with the delicacy of your lines...daisies always make life glow, heidi... huggs Heidi Sands July 4, 2019 at 6:37 PM Thank you Nette :)

Joseph May July 4, 2019 at 1:30 PM Wonderful write Heidi.. Heidi Sands July 4, 2019 at 6:37 PM Thank you Joseph :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy July 4, 2019 at 8:12 AM A very cute attribute captured. Nicely done, Heidi. Heidi Sands July 4, 2019 at 8:56 AM Thank you Subimal :)

Gershon Wolf July 3, 2019 at 7:57 PM This is just dripping with sincerity. Deightful, Heidi! Pure! :) gw Heidi Sands July 4, 2019 at 8:56 AM Thank you so much Gershon :)

Jan Allison July 3, 2019 at 6:30 PM what sweet personification Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx Heidi Sands July 3, 2019 at 6:43 PM Thank you Jan :)