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Yellow Eye

I’m a simple white daisy In a world that’s rough I don’t have thorns I am not tough I see with my yellow eye The smiles passing by Wishes, upon wishes, I try To brighten the day Keep the smiles alive Without a word to say I’m a simple white daisy Heidi Sands 7/3/19

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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/6/2019 6:01:00 AM
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You have brought to life a real person who knows herself, and is probably naive, and truthful and innocent. Love it!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/6/2019 6:39:00 AM
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Thank you Caren :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/5/2019 9:27:00 AM
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I feel bad for the humble daisy, lovers rip it petal from petal. I enjoyed this sweet piece. It is hard not to smile when looking at a daisy.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/5/2019 3:57:00 PM
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That is true. Hard not to smile looking at one. Thank you Richard! :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/4/2019 7:09:00 PM
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hello Heidi, the Daisy is a beautiful flower. On a dull day a daisy brightens the day, have a nice evening my friend.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/5/2019 8:11:00 AM
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That's true, the daisy brightens the day. Thank you Darlene :)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/4/2019 7:01:00 PM
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Indeed, daisies do spread smiles as does this beautiful poem, Heidi. Wonderfully done! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/5/2019 8:11:00 AM
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Thank you Susan :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/4/2019 3:31:00 PM
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A lovely poem Heidi. :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/4/2019 6:38:00 PM
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Thank you Gary :)
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 7/4/2019 3:10:00 PM
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sweetening the page with the delicacy of your lines...daisies always make life glow, heidi... huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/4/2019 6:37:00 PM
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Thank you Nette :)
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Joseph May
Date: 7/4/2019 1:30:00 PM
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Wonderful write Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/4/2019 6:37:00 PM
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Thank you Joseph :)
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 7/4/2019 10:29:00 AM
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A simple white daisy..plus so much more. So sweet, this special verse.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/4/2019 10:37:00 AM
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Thank you for your kind comments Sandy. Have a great day! :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/4/2019 8:12:00 AM
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A very cute attribute captured. Nicely done, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/4/2019 8:56:00 AM
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Thank you Subimal :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/3/2019 7:57:00 PM
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This is just dripping with sincerity. Deightful, Heidi! Pure! :) gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/4/2019 8:56:00 AM
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Thank you so much Gershon :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/3/2019 6:30:00 PM
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what sweet personification Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/3/2019 6:43:00 PM
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Thank you Jan :)

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