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Yellow Eye

I’m a simple white daisy
In a world that’s rough
I don’t have thorns
I am not tough
I see with my yellow eye
The smiles passing by
Wishes, upon wishes, I try
To brighten the day
Keep the smiles alive
Without a word to say
I’m a simple white daisy

Heidi Sands

7/3/19

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Caren Krutsinger Date: 7/6/2019 6:01:00 AM You have brought to life a real person who knows herself, and is probably naive, and truthful and innocent. Love it! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/6/2019 6:39:00 AM Thank you Caren :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/5/2019 9:27:00 AM I feel bad for the humble daisy, lovers rip it petal from petal. I enjoyed this sweet piece. It is hard not to smile when looking at a daisy. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/5/2019 3:57:00 PM That is true. Hard not to smile looking at one. Thank you Richard! :)

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 7/4/2019 7:09:00 PM hello Heidi, the Daisy is a beautiful flower. On a dull day a daisy brightens the day, have a nice evening my friend. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/5/2019 8:11:00 AM That's true, the daisy brightens the day. Thank you Darlene :)

Susan Ashley Date: 7/4/2019 7:01:00 PM Indeed, daisies do spread smiles as does this beautiful poem, Heidi. Wonderfully done! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/5/2019 8:11:00 AM Thank you Susan :)

Gary Smith Date: 7/4/2019 3:31:00 PM A lovely poem Heidi. :) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/4/2019 6:38:00 PM Thank you Gary :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/4/2019 3:10:00 PM sweetening the page with the delicacy of your lines...daisies always make life glow, heidi... huggs Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/4/2019 6:37:00 PM Thank you Nette :)

Joseph May Date: 7/4/2019 1:30:00 PM Wonderful write Heidi.. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/4/2019 6:37:00 PM Thank you Joseph :)

Sandra L. Weiss Date: 7/4/2019 10:29:00 AM A simple white daisy..plus so much more. So sweet, this special verse. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/4/2019 10:37:00 AM Thank you for your kind comments Sandy. Have a great day! :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 7/4/2019 8:12:00 AM A very cute attribute captured. Nicely done, Heidi. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/4/2019 8:56:00 AM Thank you Subimal :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 7/3/2019 7:57:00 PM This is just dripping with sincerity. Deightful, Heidi! Pure! :) gw Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/4/2019 8:56:00 AM Thank you so much Gershon :)

Jan Allison Date: 7/3/2019 6:30:00 PM what sweet personification Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/3/2019 6:43:00 PM Thank you Jan :)