Yellow Dresses

YELLOW   DRESSES 

Joy springs sudden and silent
From the simplest of childish roots.
Homebound from work to metro along a city way
I saw  today on one of my regular stops
The overgrowth of dandelions from the sun,
Very tall and reaching through the iron railing,   
Wind catching them  waving  happily,
Like angelic little girls  all standing tall on tip-toe,  
Trying to attract my attention and saying “Look at me,
Isn’t my bright yellow dress the prettiest?”


And indeed each one was  beautiful   -
It was too hard to choose. 
I felt like  a  god  with  these tiny saffron  Seraphim  
Looking  for my  admiration and recognition:
For their tireless, glowing  energy,
Joyfully jostling and  basking in my approval. 
Sometimes a child simply  calls  dandelions  dandies:
And today I suddenly   felt  the meaning deepen.  
They were in truth all dandies,  and  I smiled  -
I smiled silently all the way home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guzzi Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 7:27 PM
It's been too long Syd I have so missed your company & your verse, I was beyond happy this was YOU, you could give lessons in SHOWING versus telling [OH yes you do give lessons! ;)] Hug T for me. Congrad's Light & Love
Arnold Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 4:58 PM
Simply breathtaking and moved across the page with a pulse Love Cookie
Sietesantos Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 3:04 PM
Sidney, please accept my congratulations on being awarded the TOP win! Wonderful write!
Gibson Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 1:50 PM
Sidney, loved this magical, whimsical take on the contest. Just beautiful, Congratulations.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 1:00 PM
Wow!! Love the simplicity jolliness of this ..:) congratulations!! :D
Smith Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 8:19 AM
Beautiful, Sidney! I especially love the last line of the first verse. Congrats on top win!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Smith Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 7:19 AM
This wonderful Sidney...congrats on the win..hugs
Lawless Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 6:45 AM
Wonderful. all that is missing is the sound of the children in the school yard. Great win.
Maharaj Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 4:25 AM
Priceless.. congrats on your win :)
A. Sharma Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 4:00 AM
Most beautiful indeed Sidney! Congrats on first place win!
Walker  Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 1:00 AM
This is beautiful Sidney. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Verlena
Sietesantos Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 3:11 PM
Hi Sidney, this is such a beautiful write. I truly enjoyed this yellow gem!
Allison Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 6:18 PM
I still love dandelion 'clocks' and the childhood memories they hold. really enjoyed this write. hugs Jan xxx
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