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Yellow Day Lily

Yellow day lily's bloom
Tightly pinched the blossom
Against the morning's cold
Last bud of summer 
Soon 'oar's frost will close  

Gogyohka form

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Robin Davis

June 15, 2014 at 10:02 AM

Sara A very nice poem with imagery and imagination that lets the reader actually visualize this scene. thank you for the great comment on my Red Riding Hood poem.

Harry Horsman

October 31, 2012 at 8:26 AM

Sara, you must be at one with nature, your poetry is truly inspiring

Nette Onclaud

October 28, 2012 at 11:32 PM

beautiful and well-knit artpiece, sara... love the way the last line allows the imagination to drift... my winning bet.. :) huggs

Russell Sivey

October 28, 2012 at 12:07 PM

You are enjoying these Gogyoka poems my friend! I know you like the Tanka-ish look without the syllable requirements! I enjoy the challenge of the syllable requirements myself, makes for an interesting write, but the Gogyoka form is very free! This is a fantastic write Sara, I really enjoyed reading it this afternoon! Quite the special and enlightening poem, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

October 28, 2012 at 9:11 AM

Yes, I really like this. Reminds me of my poor roses in recent snow!! Yellow so pretty.

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 28, 2012 at 7:20 AM

Here is already the snow and frost arrived, nothing reminiscent of summer - Thanks for a little heat from your poem Sara, lovely written. - Have a great Sunday. - oxox / / huggs .... Anne-Lise :)

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