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Yellow Day Lily

Yellow day lily's bloom Tightly pinched the blossom Against the morning's cold Last bud of summer Soon 'oar's frost will close Gogyohka form

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Robin Davis

Date: 6/15/2014 10:02:00 AM

Sara A very nice poem with imagery and imagination that lets the reader actually visualize this scene. thank you for the great comment on my Red Riding Hood poem.

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/31/2012 8:26:00 AM

Sara, you must be at one with nature, your poetry is truly inspiring

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/28/2012 11:32:00 PM

beautiful and well-knit artpiece, sara... love the way the last line allows the imagination to drift... my winning bet.. :) huggs

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/28/2012 12:07:00 PM

You are enjoying these Gogyoka poems my friend! I know you like the Tanka-ish look without the syllable requirements! I enjoy the challenge of the syllable requirements myself, makes for an interesting write, but the Gogyoka form is very free! This is a fantastic write Sara, I really enjoyed reading it this afternoon! Quite the special and enlightening poem, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2012 9:11:00 AM

Yes, I really like this. Reminds me of my poor roses in recent snow!! Yellow so pretty.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/28/2012 7:20:00 AM

Here is already the snow and frost arrived, nothing reminiscent of summer - Thanks for a little heat from your poem Sara, lovely written. - Have a great Sunday. - oxox / / huggs .... Anne-Lise :)