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Yellow Crocus

Sunshine in the garden where the crocus now bloom A burst of yellow shows hope through the old brown leaves returning where it grows Golden yellow petals a recipe for spring brings cheer with light of day It's now in the making a time for all to play Heidi Sands 4/14/22

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Sotto Poet

Date: 4/14/2022 12:35:00 PM

Heidi, The arrival of springtime that you portray via the petals of vibrant yellow flowers is appealing to me. This is a lovely poem.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/14/2022 1:10:00 PM

I am happy to hear that. It is amazing to see the bright yellow flowers, (the 1st this spring), after so many gray days. Thank you for the kind comment :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/14/2022 11:33:00 AM

Wonderful write Heidi, I love "sunshine in the garden"

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/14/2022 11:39:00 AM

Thank you Joseph. The flowers are bright :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/14/2022 11:16:00 AM

The sunshiny yellow cheers me :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/14/2022 11:38:00 AM

Great to hear Kim. The yellow cheers me too. Thank you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/14/2022 9:20:00 AM

I like the emergence of spring you convey through blossoms of vibrant yellow flowers. Delightful poem, Heidi. Best for a win.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/14/2022 9:29:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. It is so nice to see them! I appreciate your support, always :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/14/2022 8:54:00 AM

"A burst of yellow shows hope through the old brown leaves returning where it grows" Beautiful poetry! Profound in many ways. Have a great day!

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/14/2022 8:59:00 AM

Thank you very much Joe. I appreciate your kind comments. I hope you have a nice day :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 4/14/2022 8:24:00 AM

Hello Heidi, 'hope through the old brown leaves returning where it grows' Very nice. Made me reminisce the changes new Spring life brings in ages past. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/14/2022 8:48:00 AM

Hi. Yes, it is very nice to see the first flowers of the season. The woodpecker are all around too. They have mainly been hammering trees, but the other day I heard one on the metal again. I was surprised it didn't continue, but it may. I hope all is well Thank you Richard :)