Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Yellow Crocus

Sunshine in the garden
where the crocus now bloom
A burst of yellow shows
hope through the old brown leaves
returning where it grows

Golden yellow petals
a recipe for spring
brings cheer with light of day
It's now in the making
a time for all to play

Heidi Sands

4/14/22

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Sotto Poet April 14, 2022 at 12:35 PM Heidi, The arrival of springtime that you portray via the petals of vibrant yellow flowers is appealing to me. This is a lovely poem. Heidi Sands April 14, 2022 at 1:10 PM I am happy to hear that. It is amazing to see the bright yellow flowers, (the 1st this spring), after so many gray days. Thank you for the kind comment :)

Joseph May April 14, 2022 at 11:33 AM Wonderful write Heidi, I love "sunshine in the garden" Heidi Sands April 14, 2022 at 11:39 AM Thank you Joseph. The flowers are bright :)

Kim Rodrigues April 14, 2022 at 11:16 AM The sunshiny yellow cheers me :) Heidi Sands April 14, 2022 at 11:38 AM Great to hear Kim. The yellow cheers me too. Thank you :)

Vijay Pandit April 14, 2022 at 9:20 AM I like the emergence of spring you convey through blossoms of vibrant yellow flowers. Delightful poem, Heidi. Best for a win. Heidi Sands April 14, 2022 at 9:29 AM Thank you Vijay. It is so nice to see them! I appreciate your support, always :)

Joseph P. DiMino April 14, 2022 at 8:54 AM "A burst of yellow shows hope through the old brown leaves returning where it grows" Beautiful poetry! Profound in many ways. Have a great day! Heidi Sands April 14, 2022 at 8:59 AM Thank you very much Joe. I appreciate your kind comments. I hope you have a nice day :)

Quoth Theraven April 14, 2022 at 8:24 AM Hello Heidi, 'hope through the old brown leaves returning where it grows' Very nice. Made me reminisce the changes new Spring life brings in ages past. -Richard Heidi Sands April 14, 2022 at 8:48 AM Hi. Yes, it is very nice to see the first flowers of the season. The woodpecker are all around too. They have mainly been hammering trees, but the other day I heard one on the metal again. I was surprised it didn't continue, but it may. I hope all is well Thank you Richard :)