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Yellow Carpet

The Sunflowers just want to dance Show their faces to bring about smiles Reaching higher and higher in a stance Toward the sky, across the miles Parting paths for the wind to travel Between their bodies, colored green A stage for them all to unravel On a yellow carpet of waves to be seen Heidi Sands 7/12/20

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/15/2020 8:37:00 PM

You've picked my favorite flower. Thanks for portraying sunflowers so prettily, Heidi! Cheers, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/16/2020 9:16:00 AM

Thank you Gershon and you are welcome. I hope you have a great day :)

Joseph May

Date: 7/15/2020 12:46:00 PM

They bring sunny smiles, Wonderful write Heidi...

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/15/2020 1:47:00 PM

Yes they do. Thank you Joseph :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/14/2020 12:29:00 PM

The farm close to us grows sunflowers and they do look like a yellow carpet of waves when a breeze blows. Beautiful write Heidi, Blessings and love, Jennifer. P.S Hope things are getting a little better every day.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/14/2020 1:15:00 PM

Oh, that sounds nice at the farm Jennifer. Thank you for your kind comment. I appreciate your support. Yes, I am much better. A couple issues still and feel like I don't have the energy I used to have, before all this, but doing ok. I hope all is well :)