Yellow Carpet

The Sunflowers just want to dance
Show their faces to bring about smiles
Reaching higher and higher in a stance
Toward the sky, across the miles

Parting paths for the wind to travel
Between their bodies, colored green
A stage for them all to unravel
On a yellow carpet of waves to be seen

Heidi Sands

7/12/20

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Date: 7/15/2020 8:37:00 PM
You've picked my favorite flower. Thanks for portraying sunflowers so prettily, Heidi! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 7/16/2020 9:16:00 AM
Thank you Gershon and you are welcome. I hope you have a great day :)
Date: 7/15/2020 12:46:00 PM
They bring sunny smiles, Wonderful write Heidi...
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Date: 7/15/2020 1:47:00 PM
Yes they do. Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 7/14/2020 12:29:00 PM
The farm close to us grows sunflowers and they do look like a yellow carpet of waves when a breeze blows. Beautiful write Heidi, Blessings and love, Jennifer. P.S Hope things are getting a little better every day.
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Date: 7/14/2020 1:15:00 PM
Oh, that sounds nice at the farm Jennifer. Thank you for your kind comment. I appreciate your support. Yes, I am much better. A couple issues still and feel like I don't have the energy I used to have, before all this, but doing ok. I hope all is well :)
Date: 7/14/2020 9:14:00 AM
Great imagery Heidi. I see the bright yellow and green. Sunflower faces are so cheerful!
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Date: 7/14/2020 9:18:00 AM
Thank you very much Sandy. Yes...the faces so cheerful :)
Date: 7/13/2020 3:04:00 PM
Such lovely thought are conjured by this lovely and peaceful write. Very well done Heidi!! Happy Monday xxoo
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Date: 7/13/2020 4:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Mike. I hope you are well. Happy Monday! xxoo :)
Date: 7/13/2020 3:26:00 AM
Very beautiful carpet, I should say, well written, Heidi:)
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Date: 7/13/2020 8:40:00 AM
Thank you Jo :)
Date: 7/12/2020 9:00:00 PM
Heidi, beautifully penned _Constance
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Date: 7/13/2020 8:40:00 AM
Thank you Constance :)
Date: 7/12/2020 4:43:00 PM
I see a carpet of flowers and they bring a feeling of magic Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/13/2020 8:39:00 AM
Thank you Caren. I am happy to hear that :)
Date: 7/12/2020 4:24:00 PM
Beautiful majestic flowers Heidi, the perfect image of summer Hope you're well Tom
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Date: 7/13/2020 8:39:00 AM
Thank you very much Tom :)
Date: 7/12/2020 3:56:00 PM
They are such beautiful charmers--so is the voice of your poem Heidi..I see them smiling.
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Date: 7/12/2020 4:00:00 PM
They sure are Vijay. Big faces and big smiles! Thank you for your kind comment :)
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