Yellow Butterfly

yellow butterfly wingspan dramatic in sun - a flattened raccoon

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/14/2023 1:31:00 AM

I have never seen a racoon, but only butterflies.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2023 2:01:00 AM

Butterflies are beautiful!

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/13/2023 3:29:00 PM

With elegance, KIM, you crafted a haiku that captures the beauty of a yellow butterfly with its striking wings in the sunlight, juxtaposed against the sad image of a flattened raccoon. Well done

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2023 4:05:00 PM

Thank you for seeing what I was going for!

Paige Hind

Date: 6/13/2023 1:30:00 PM

I can see it. I can see the image.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2023 4:05:00 PM

Thanks, Paige!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/13/2023 1:22:00 PM

A creative write. Poor raccoon. I love butterflies. Have a great day...................

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2023 4:05:00 PM

Thank you, Paula! It was a strange sight!

Michael Tor

Date: 6/13/2023 8:39:00 AM

My wife Judy loves butterflies. When she sees one she always thinks it is her late mom visiting. The Monarch species hope I spelled it right...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2023 11:49:00 AM

This was a strange sighting. Butterfly on top of what was left of raccoon. Strange indeed!