Yellow

Youthful love erupts,
Embracing all rational thoughts,
Lurking during times when it is not sought.
Longing in its euphoria, the heat smiles.
Overflowing with giddiness, you laugh at its whiles.
Wondrous is young love, for with it, the world brightens.

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October 7, 2014
Form: Acrostic
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Trichet Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 5:37 PM
Loved where you took this Dr. enjoyed reading it very much. Congrats
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 8:47 AM
Love really does overflow with giddiness. I love that line. Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta.
Schumacker Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 8:35 AM
Hi Dr. Mehta, Nice bright yellow world. Nice win. Have a pleasant day. Earl
Andresen Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 6:33 AM
- Congrats with your winning poem in the contest, Dr. Ram - A pleasure to read it again - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
De La Luna Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 10:15 PM
yellow blooms! love this! Congratulations, Dr. Ram!
Yvonne Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 9:03 PM
The sun is yellow and radiant. Congratulations on your win.
Gorelick Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 4:14 PM
Nothing like young love, I think I remember...lol. Congrats Dr...BG
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 4:10 PM
Yellow like gold. That is when love is so bright and happy! Congrats for the win, Dr. Ram.
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 10:54 AM
dropping back with my congratulations Dr Mehta:-) hugs Jan xx
Kamoonpuri Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 8:56 AM
Yeah u r right, young premarital love is euphoric, unsteady fickle and unreliable too. Yor poem is constructed in impressive wording and poetry devices. Regards Doc.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 5:40 PM
Old love is pretty special too Dr. Ram. But I know what you mean. A first love lingers on the mind like no other. A lovely acrostic!
Smith Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 2:17 PM
Ah young love...no expectations...cheers Tim
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 1:41 PM
lovely and bright with a touch of romance:-) hugs Jan xx
Kiser Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 1:40 PM
Beautiful...just beautiful.
Andresen Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 12:08 PM
- Just beautiful, Dr. Ram! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
A  Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 12:03 PM
Happy Early Birthday Dr Ram. :)
A  Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 11:57 AM
Love the color, and feeling of your poem. SKAT
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