Years Gone Bye

After all these Years Crying many Tears for YOU LENORE : Still my Wife

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/8/2012 6:57:00 PM

Da!~ Brilliant one. :) Always, Laura

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2010 6:25:00 PM

You are the most faithful husband ever!

Date: 12/30/2008 3:19:00 PM

The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Your love stands as a beacon through the years. Lenore is smiling! Blessings to you. Have a wonderful New Year! Karen

Denis Joe

Date: 12/30/2008 5:27:00 AM

I usually avoid haiku because a lot of it seems to be just 5-7-5 and the essense of haiku is ignored in the quest to appear clever. Here though you take on the Zen approach to the form of time-situation-result (there are some varients) and present the reader with an object of beauty and skill. yes it appears simplistic at first, but the work that goes into writing like this takes a good deal of imagination, inspiration and good art.

Michael Jordan

Date: 12/29/2008 3:51:00 PM

HGarvey how are you my friend - loved this Haiku - May the coming year bring you and those you love many blessings - MJ

Daniel Neal

Date: 12/29/2008 11:04:00 AM

Nice Haiku, your love is endless. DN

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/29/2008 9:28:00 AM

There is never any doubt of your love and devotion. Beautiful. Love, Shar