Years Gone Bye

After all these Years
Crying many Tears for YOU
LENORE : Still my Wife
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Breidenthal Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 6:57 PM
Da!~ Brilliant one. :) Always, Laura
Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2010 at 6:25 PM
You are the most faithful husband ever!
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December 30, 2008 at 3:19 PM
The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Your love stands as a beacon through the years. Lenore is smiling! Blessings to you. Have a wonderful New Year! Karen
Joe Avatar
December 30, 2008 at 5:27 AM
I usually avoid haiku because a lot of it seems to be just 5-7-5 and the essense of haiku is ignored in the quest to appear clever. Here though you take on the Zen approach to the form of time-situation-result (there are some varients) and present the reader with an object of beauty and skill. yes it appears simplistic at first, but the work that goes into writing like this takes a good deal of imagination, inspiration and good art.
Jordan Avatar
December 29, 2008 at 3:51 PM
HGarvey how are you my friend - loved this Haiku - May the coming year bring you and those you love many blessings - MJ
Neal Avatar
December 29, 2008 at 11:04 AM
Nice Haiku, your love is endless. DN
Winter Avatar
December 29, 2008 at 9:28 AM
There is never any doubt of your love and devotion. Beautiful. Love, Shar
Moreno Avatar
December 28, 2008 at 10:29 PM
Great work HG, I hope you have a Happy and Safe New Year...Raul
Gorelick Avatar
December 28, 2008 at 9:10 PM
HG, how I wish I could change the past for you. I know you have cried your heart out. Keep writing about it, I think it helps. Xliamp.. Beeg..
Payne Avatar
December 28, 2008 at 8:32 PM
aww this is so sweet! Great haiku! Blessings, ~Michaela~
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