Yearning of a Lonely Road

The melody of the silent wind spoke
to the lonely road towards the twilight hour.
Cute footsteps of the moonbeam 
thrilled the seashore besides the divine power.


Sweet giggle of the heartbeat of the waves
embroidered the fashion coat of all unstitched dreams
some are designers, some are ethnics 
Like the road separated by sea and streams .


Its been a long time,nobody passed by this path !
Whenever the road glimpses a falling star,
By closing her grey eyes ,
she yearns for her most awaiting dearest passenger....!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 6:00 PM
wow, that last stanza was such a cool image and personification of the grey eyed road. Awesome.
Cadet Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 8:45 PM
I came across this again and continue to enjoy this gem. "...Sweet giggle of the heartbeat of the waves..." among others, is such a beautiful line.
Cadet Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 2:35 AM
I love the first two verses. Thanks for sharing.
Deb Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 9:09 AM
Thank you so much dear poet for your kind visit and comment.
Sinha Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 12:40 AM
Lovely poem, Nilima!
Deb Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 11:20 AM
thank you dear poet
Sinha Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 12:40 AM
Lovely poem, Nilima!
Smith Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 2:54 PM
Oh a very lovely and poetic piece Nilima.
Deb Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 12:10 AM
Thank you so much dear poet
A   Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 2:41 PM
Nilma, good luck in the contest. Linda
Deb Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 12:11 AM
Thank you so much Linda
Turner Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 6:24 AM
Seems rather sad to me. I sense loneliness in your heart. Very deep emotional write, Nilima.
Deb Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 12:38 PM
Thank you very much.Sometimes loneliness leads our emotions strongly ...
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