Yearning of a Lonely Road

The melody of the silent wind spoke
to the lonely road towards the twilight hour.
Cute footsteps of the moonbeam 
thrilled the seashore besides the divine power.


Sweet giggle of the heartbeat of the waves
embroidered the fashion coat of all unstitched dreams
some are designers, some are ethnics 
Like the road separated by sea and streams .


Its been a long time,nobody passed by this path !
Whenever the road glimpses a falling star,
By closing her grey eyes ,
she yearns for her most awaiting dearest passenger....!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/21/2017 6:00:00 PM
wow, that last stanza was such a cool image and personification of the grey eyed road. Awesome.
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Date: 11/20/2016 8:45:00 PM
I came across this again and continue to enjoy this gem. "...Sweet giggle of the heartbeat of the waves..." among others, is such a beautiful line.
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Date: 9/15/2016 2:35:00 AM
I love the first two verses. Thanks for sharing.
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Nilima Deb
Date: 9/27/2016 9:09:00 AM
Thank you so much dear poet for your kind visit and comment.
Date: 7/24/2016 12:40:00 AM
Lovely poem, Nilima!
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Nilima Deb
Date: 7/24/2016 11:20:00 AM
thank you dear poet
Date: 7/24/2016 12:40:00 AM
Lovely poem, Nilima!
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Date: 7/12/2016 2:54:00 PM
Oh a very lovely and poetic piece Nilima.
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Nilima Deb
Date: 7/13/2016 12:10:00 AM
Thank you so much dear poet
Date: 7/12/2016 2:41:00 PM
Nilma, good luck in the contest. Linda
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Nilima Deb
Date: 7/13/2016 12:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda
Date: 7/10/2016 6:24:00 AM
Seems rather sad to me. I sense loneliness in your heart. Very deep emotional write, Nilima.
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Nilima Deb
Date: 7/10/2016 12:38:00 PM
Thank you very much.Sometimes loneliness leads our emotions strongly ...
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