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Yearning

We met by a stream in the midst of a dream faded into morning’s mist O, how we yearned to kiss

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Date: 8/6/2025 4:16:00 PM
this couplet is soft and sweet...and engaging. Nicely penned, Gershon...have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Date: 8/6/2025 2:29:00 PM
This is soft and dreamy—like a memory you’re not sure was real. That last line really lingers… simple, romantic, and full of longing. Beautifully done, Gershon!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/6/2025 6:59:00 PM
Appreciate your enthusiasm and sincere kindness, Rowena. Thank you so much, Gershon
Date: 8/6/2025 8:38:00 AM
Simple and sweet BB ...just like " "? Hehe....Debx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/6/2025 7:05:00 PM
just like "the simpleton who wrote it" - lol.
Date: 8/6/2025 5:39:00 AM
You are very good with couplets, Gershon ~ short, sharp & sweet. x.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/6/2025 7:06:00 PM
Very nice of you to say so, Ghairo. Thank you so much. ~ Gershon
Date: 8/5/2025 9:41:00 PM
A surprise at the end ... yearned to kiss? I was almost sure the kiss had already taken place my friend. :-) Nice Couplet poetry. Bill
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/6/2025 7:07:00 PM
Perhaps a stolen kiss had taken place, after all.

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