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Yearn Haiku

koi not to be caught
fisher breathed a sullen sigh
pond veiled in lilies

8/6/2018

 captcha of my log in ; kfp  (4=f)

Poetry Contest: haiku captcha 
 Sponsored by: Harry Horsman

Copyright © Eve Roper | Year Posted 2018

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September 19, 2018 at 6:40 AM

I really loved this one Eve!Many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Virginia Waters

September 18, 2018 at 3:03 AM

like this a lot - classic haiku with depth

September 18, 2018 at 3:02 AM

A lovely winning entry, Eve! Impressed by the fisher's 'sullen sigh' and the end line. Congratulations for a merited podium finish. Hugs // paul

September 17, 2018 at 9:00 PM

Eve, congratulations on your 2nd place win with your delightful fisher vs koi haiku :)

September 17, 2018 at 8:19 PM

Congrats on your silver medal win, Eve.

September 17, 2018 at 5:09 AM

Love this Eve. Congratulations on your 2nd place in my contest..Harry

Andrea Dietrich

August 10, 2018 at 5:49 PM

very nicely done with those letters, Eve!

Michelle Faulkner

August 7, 2018 at 1:16 PM

Love 'pond veiled in lilies,' so lovely!

August 7, 2018 at 7:03 AM

Clever..well done, Eve.

David William Breidenthal

August 7, 2018 at 5:48 AM

This poem is very cool! i like it!:)

August 6, 2018 at 11:18 PM

intricate, like...the oldt 'modest' watch

August 6, 2018 at 8:10 PM

Ah cute! well done Eve!!!!

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