Yearlings Zigzag

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Abecedarian
Abecedarian is a form of poem where each line or verse begins with a successive letter of the alphabet (a, b, c, d, etc)

Arctic bear cubs, den, exiting frozen grounds halfway into June. Keeping low, mothers navigate onshore perils, quietly roving. Sensing they've uninvitedly violated wildlife's Xenia, yearlings zigzag. (Abecedarian) 12/03/2021 ''Z'' Contest, New or Old - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Constance La France

Date: 12/11/2021 3:04:00 PM

Emile, congratulations on your Honorable Mention in my "Z" contest ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/12/2021 7:07:00 AM

Thanks, Constance, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/10/2021 11:24:00 AM

Such a wonderfully crafted write Emile. Even in this form it invites wonder of these amazing animals! Wonderful choice of words. Congratulations on your win! Blessings!

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/10/2021 12:41:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sam, it is always nice to hear from you my friend, Emile.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 12/5/2021 4:11:00 PM

To pen in Abecedarian form is quite a challenge and your poem is a complete story in 8 lines. Fascinating! Blessings, Paulette

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/5/2021 5:49:00 PM

Thanks, Paulette, your comments are always appreciated, my friend, Emile.