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Dec. 30, 2023   14.11pm

Year 2023



A year of strong bond among my family to farthest kin,
Frequent personal to virtual long communication in teams,
Lost one reunited us in prayers ‘til new born came.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Gasun Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 11:52 PM
2023 in One to Three Short Lines Contest Judged: 1/8/2024 10:46:00 AM Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich Place 2 (up to 3rd multi-w)
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January 9, 2024 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write. You are blessed to have a strong family. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away..................
Gasun Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 11:40 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem my dear poet friend Paula and your heartfelt congratulatory greetings. I'm glad you've enjoyed it. I enjoyed yours too and my heartfelt congratulations as well. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs
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January 8, 2024 at 11:12 AM
I enjoyed learning what happened in your life this last year. Thanks for entering my contest and congrats to you.
Gasun Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 11:38 PM
Thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet friend Andrea. Your approval through my win means a lot to me. God bless you always and your writings.
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December 30, 2023 at 7:42 PM
Oh, I really felt the depth of this write, so brilliantly you've conveyed the overall essence the year 2023 for your life.. An impeccable sijo, which shows that you've experienced the loss of someone, yet on the other hand, the arrival of a new life brought some zephyrs of healing.. I hope that the new year brings you happiness, peace, prosperity, light and love.. Sending my best wishes ~ I loved reading this poem..
Gasun Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 8:13 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your encouraging/ uplifting comments my dear poet friend Hiya. Thank you so much for the good wishes too. Happy New Year my dear poet friend. Hugs
Allison Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 3:33 AM
You are lucky to have such strong family connections and what a lovely uplifting ending to your poem Len, Happy New Year:-) hugs jan xx
Gasun Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 8:12 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend Jan. Happy New Year 2024 too. Wishing you all the best this coming year especially good health, lots of joys and God's bountiful blessings and love. Hugs
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December 30, 2023 at 1:20 AM
Ah dear len, this is so beautiful, so well written on the year and what it has been like for you, you’ve summed it all up really well, i felt the depth of this and the flow of your sijo is seamless. Its always hard losing loved ones, and your last line depicts loss and also arrival of new born, which is a blessing too, i hope next year will be a beautiful one for you. Sending you light always. I appreciate your support and being able to read your work too.
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January 1, 2024 at 8:09 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting/encouraging words and your loving wishes and light. Sending you back blessings and love. I hope this year is a good and beautiful year for all of us my dear poet Ink. Thanks a lot also for your support. Happy New Year 2024! Hugs
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