Yeah... I Said It

Have you ever been on the train or bus
take a sniff and sit with disgust?
There's a bad feeling in your gut
because you know you smell some butt
All you think is someone move me
cause I'm tired of smelling this ladies Coochie
It's only a few stops,
you can't loose your seat,
but it's killing you smelling 
that man's feet
You're nauceaus and there's sweat in your palms
It's the tart smell of underarms
Getting from here to there is a chore
and just when you think you can't take no more,
you talk to someone cause that's all that's left
and the whole time you can see their breath

I know that this may sound harsh
so do us all a favor...

PLEASE WASH!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Murphy Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 3:33 PM
how stinky but so true some people just don't care well spoken loved it faleshia
Arteaga Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 11:39 AM
uhg reminds me of the gym everyone stinks but there's always this one guy that no one wants to work out near him XD
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