Yea So...

you said you always wanted someone that 
would stay by your side
but when i tried....
you left mine
 
you said you wanted someone that would be there 
through thick and thin
and i was....
no matter what you did
 
you said you wanted someone that you 
could call your wife
but....
i was willing to give you my life
 
i stayed by your side through thick and thin
i gave you my life....
but look how it ends.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Parker Avatar
September 24, 2008 at 7:10 PM
I really liked your poem, and the way you wrote it. The words in the poem remind me of something i might write about. I like when I find poems that say what i try to say in my poems.
Jordan Avatar
August 4, 2008 at 6:15 AM
Rebecca - Often what people say and do are totally different - You know that when ever one part of our life ends a new one begins - Did you read my poem "One Second" its off the hook - Stay Strong
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