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Ye Ole Heart

If you wait long enough, things will surely start clicking Your elbows, your knees, then your eyes will start flicking You'll bump into doors Trip on things on the floor But everything's okay as long as ye ole heart keeps on ticking

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/10/2016 10:13:00 AM
Love that Timex... Takes a licking... But keeps on a ticking... My heart beat ticks with the pace maker but the rhythm is now elongating... I think my heart has more imagination than Dragon does... on how to make trouble now a days... LOL...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/11/2016 7:26:00 AM
Where did all the years go!???? xox
Date: 2/9/2016 10:58:00 PM
Ha! Great! I really like limericks (who doesn't) and this is a good one.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/10/2016 7:07:00 AM
Hey Brian... mucho thanks!!! That's just about all I write now! Come on by again! Cheers, Jack
Date: 2/9/2016 4:47:00 PM
if yer ticker is ticking it's all that you need...don't need much more now that would be greed...if your down on the floor...or heading out the door....just open yer heart and follow it's lead
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/9/2016 4:58:00 PM
SOUND ADVICE Mr. Timothy!!!
Date: 2/9/2016 3:56:00 PM
Clever no other word for this Limerick...aside from humorous, delightful, a winner, marvelous, etc and so forth......
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/9/2016 4:14:00 PM
WHOAAAAAAAAA! Can I be your friend... you're a nice lady!!! LOL Love and smoochie kisses... xox

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