Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Ye Ole Heart

If you wait long enough, things will surely start clicking
Your elbows, your knees, then your eyes will start flicking
You'll bump into doors
Trip on things on the floor
But everything's okay as long as ye ole heart keeps on ticking

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Carol Eastman February 10, 2016 at 10:13 AM Love that Timex... Takes a licking... But keeps on a ticking... My heart beat ticks with the pace maker but the rhythm is now elongating... I think my heart has more imagination than Dragon does... on how to make trouble now a days... LOL... Jack Ellison February 11, 2016 at 7:26 AM Where did all the years go!???? xox

Brian Mcclain February 9, 2016 at 10:58 PM Ha! Great! I really like limericks (who doesn't) and this is a good one. Jack Ellison February 10, 2016 at 7:07 AM Hey Brian... mucho thanks!!! That's just about all I write now! Come on by again! Cheers, Jack

Tim Smith February 9, 2016 at 4:47 PM if yer ticker is ticking it's all that you need...don't need much more now that would be greed...if your down on the floor...or heading out the door....just open yer heart and follow it's lead Jack Ellison February 9, 2016 at 4:58 PM SOUND ADVICE Mr. Timothy!!!

Judy Konos February 9, 2016 at 3:56 PM Clever no other word for this Limerick...aside from humorous, delightful, a winner, marvelous, etc and so forth...... Jack Ellison February 9, 2016 at 4:14 PM WHOAAAAAAAAA! Can I be your friend... you're a nice lady!!! LOL Love and smoochie kisses... xox