Yawning

Yawning makes you look like an absolute goof We can see what you had for breakfast and your missing tooth You're incapacitated Visions of the first girl you dated And all the naughtiness you were guilty of during your youth

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Russell Sivey

Date: 9/8/2017 3:16:00 PM

Oh, I better keep my mouth shut then! I'll yawn only in the bathroom! I really enjoyed reading your delightful poem this afternoon! I'm hurrying to get as many comments in! You have produced a fabulous piece here my friend! Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/8/2017 3:23:00 PM

Take it easy... it will speed up your recovery, Sir Russell! We'll wait patiently!!! CHEERS!!!

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/8/2017 11:42:00 AM

Were you that naughty?

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/8/2017 1:46:00 PM

YUP!!! Maybe even naughtier!!! xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 9/8/2017 8:09:00 AM

Really? All of my past on display?//Say it ain't so, I pray!//Forswear and forsooth//on my golden tooth//I'll be locked up for out-of-bounds play! GOOF ON JACKSON!!!

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/8/2017 11:41:00 AM

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/8/2017 8:24:00 AM

So you have stuff to hide... I'm as pure as the driven snow!!! WHATTA GOOF!!!