Yawn, Ho-Hum

    Never been to Norway
        nor to Finland or Sweden
      
     After all, my wife Eve and I
        left the Garden of Eden
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 4:19 PM
just clever! enjoyed!
Godwin Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 4:10 PM
To go where exactly? Where did y'all chose to reside? Very cute, cute one. I've sent you a soup mail. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Canerdy Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 11:22 AM
So concise and clever, Gershon. Janice
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 10:22 AM
Hello Gershon, Ah! You will remember tjois place n your memory. LOL. Enjoy your dcahy mgt friend. /Darlene/
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 6:03 AM
A bit funny, yet somber too! Well done!
Fleming Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 4:18 AM
I went to a Nordic country once, Denmark, for an extended fishing holiday...what an amazingly neat and tidy place! I swear to God, I never even saw a single discarded cigarette-butt lying on the pavement. Bet its not like that now. Nice one, Gershon. :) john
Baker Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 9:43 PM
Dear Adam, sorry about the apple thing. I know y'all got kicked out and now we're paying the price. I know you did the best you could to obey God, but oops. Nice one gw. I like it! BB
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