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Yang Male...

She is so very she... super powered world... fitted with her masculinity hot wired...understands the dream... if you are in her corner she'll ensure you will survive... ...star striker...yet she pauses for the moon... she knows the world in herself... With her strength she will strive...Venus on her side... this yang male will shelter stealth mode...allow Venus to decide...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/12/2009 12:47:00 AM
'...yet she pauses for the moon' is a revelatory phrase... a modern couple who understand each other fully, they will compromise and flourish. An excellent piece Eileen! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 2/28/2009 1:36:00 PM
Clever poem, Eileen. The lines "If you are in her corner, she'll ensure you will survive" say a lot about the support you give to others. Thanks for sharing, Carolyn
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