James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Yahweh's Glory

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   Where does your early morning
                        breath
                           rise
                or have descent
                    or vaporize 
 
                Who can vaunt
                      vaulting
                  this vast vat
                   which even 
                           in
                    rainbows 
                     i did see

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Carol Sunshine Brown November 11, 2010 at 12:29 PM Congratulations on your poetry X2 making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest. The best to you in the finals James. This time I only have one that made it through the first round. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 10, 2010 at 5:19 AM Congrats James on having two poems selected in the first round of competition in the P.S. contest.. good luck my friend in the next phase luv..

Carolyn Devonshire November 9, 2010 at 6:50 PM Exhilerating, James! Congrats on making it through the first round of the Soup contest with this awesome poem. Love, Carolyn

Daver Austin November 8, 2010 at 2:19 PM Bravo, Sir James - a real FLYER. Took me right off my feet and up into the stratosphere. Congrats on this selection. Love, dave

Carol Sunshine Brown November 8, 2010 at 10:32 AM Congratulations on your poem being featured this week James. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 7, 2010 at 3:42 PM Congrats James on your featured poem this week on the Soup my friend.. a great one to share with us all today with luv.. thankxxx for your sweet comments on my poetry this happy Sunday..luv..

Diane Christian October 25, 2009 at 5:46 AM thanks for your kind comments on my poem titled image, and as to your poem may all the Glory be to God, God bless you from diane

John Freeman October 16, 2009 at 7:09 PM I love this James"To Jehovah's Glory" glory to whom glory is due. Sincerely, Moses

Donna Golden October 9, 2009 at 8:43 PM Lovely, James! You've written a beautiful tribute. Hugs, Donna

Joseph Spence Sr October 9, 2009 at 11:44 AM This is excellent. I like the alliteration, the flow of words, and the impacting essence of the piece. Great job! ~Joseph

Carolyn Devonshire October 8, 2009 at 8:03 AM Provocative and brilliant writing, James! I like the thought of seeing rainbows in the "early morning breath." Surely, this breath goes somewhere and you have given us a special way to visualize it! Love you! Carolyn

Daver Austin October 6, 2009 at 8:49 AM Beautiful vision. Thanks for reading my stuff and the congrats. Love, daver

Doris Culverhouse October 6, 2009 at 7:42 AM nicley penned

Diane Christian October 6, 2009 at 2:47 AM a great poem James, so devotional, we strong christians here as you know and we have a song with there is no God like Jehova in it on one of thr big worship cds, I love them all, God bless you from diane

Charmaine Chircop October 5, 2009 at 10:57 PM i'm glad you ve seen the colored rainbows,the early morning breatihing,a nice poem James and i love the aliteration of the V words--Charma

Raul Moreno October 5, 2009 at 8:59 PM Nice use of alliteration, great work James...Raul