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Yahweh's Glory

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Where does your early morning
                 breath
                   rise
          or have descent
             or vaporize 
 
          Who can vaunt
               vaulting
            this vast vat
            which even 
                   in
              rainbows 
              i did see

Copyright © James Peranteau | Year Posted 2009

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/11/2010 12:29:00 PM Congratulations on your poetry X2 making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest. The best to you in the finals James. This time I only have one that made it through the first round. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/10/2010 5:19:00 AM Congrats James on having two poems selected in the first round of competition in the P.S. contest.. good luck my friend in the next phase luv.. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 11/9/2010 6:50:00 PM Exhilerating, James! Congrats on making it through the first round of the Soup contest with this awesome poem. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 11/8/2010 2:19:00 PM Bravo, Sir James - a real FLYER. Took me right off my feet and up into the stratosphere. Congrats on this selection. Love, dave Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/8/2010 10:32:00 AM Congratulations on your poem being featured this week James. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/7/2010 3:42:00 PM Congrats James on your featured poem this week on the Soup my friend.. a great one to share with us all today with luv.. thankxxx for your sweet comments on my poetry this happy Sunday..luv.. Login to Reply

Diane Christian Date: 10/25/2009 5:46:00 AM thanks for your kind comments on my poem titled image, and as to your poem may all the Glory be to God, God bless you from diane Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 10/16/2009 7:09:00 PM I love this James"To Jehovah's Glory" glory to whom glory is due. Sincerely, Moses Login to Reply

Donna Golden Date: 10/9/2009 8:43:00 PM Lovely, James! You've written a beautiful tribute. Hugs, Donna Login to Reply

Joseph Spence Sr Date: 10/9/2009 11:44:00 AM This is excellent. I like the alliteration, the flow of words, and the impacting essence of the piece. Great job! ~Joseph Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/8/2009 8:03:00 AM Provocative and brilliant writing, James! I like the thought of seeing rainbows in the "early morning breath." Surely, this breath goes somewhere and you have given us a special way to visualize it! Love you! Carolyn Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 10/6/2009 8:49:00 AM Beautiful vision. Thanks for reading my stuff and the congrats. Love, daver Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 10/6/2009 7:42:00 AM nicley penned Login to Reply

Diane Christian Date: 10/6/2009 2:47:00 AM a great poem James, so devotional, we strong christians here as you know and we have a song with there is no God like Jehova in it on one of thr big worship cds, I love them all, God bless you from diane Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 10/5/2009 10:57:00 PM i'm glad you ve seen the colored rainbows,the early morning breatihing,a nice poem James and i love the aliteration of the V words--Charma Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 10/5/2009 8:59:00 PM Nice use of alliteration, great work James...Raul Login to Reply