Laura Breidenthal Poet Free verse

X-Rayed

6/6/12
 
I've unfolded you upon a screen
But what I see is confusing
All of what I know is gone
Has fled from the life of this scene

Your light has darkened into off-white
And my mind is raking in doubt
Everything on the outside is erased
Has sadly taken flight

You are perfectly displayed
Nothing dislocated, disclosed, dismayed
You are perfectly X-rayed
But some rays have gone astray

You appears as you are
And always will be

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Carol Sunshine Brown July 11, 2012 at 12:38 PM It was such a pleasure to read your poetry today Laura. I hope to be able in the next few weeks to find the time and energy to read and comment. May you walk through the garden of inspiration and continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol