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XOX World ( A Valentine to Sun) caressing my face weightlessly and soundlessly. . . . Sun’s light wakes me as I dress myself he peeks through my window and invites me to play My neck tingles as I'm driving with the top down. . . . Sun in hot pursuit I stop at the lake his bright reflection ripples where ducks are floating drifting blissfully I surrender my body to his warm embrace as Sun’s strength recedes sky blazes orange and red. . . . but I just feel blue night finds me at home rubbing lotion where he left A scarlet hickey For PD's "MY FIRST 2012 VALENTINE *CONTEST* HAIKU~ ONLY~ XOX Poetry Contest
PS Love, Andrea (hope I did that in time!!)

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Date: 5/16/2015 11:17:00 AM
I'm kidding, I am not bothering you. I want to see the difference between your old haiku and new ones. Maybe then I might understand. Andrea. Everyone has a different view when it comes to haiku. SKAT
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Date: 8/14/2013 9:50:00 PM
love the haiku ;}
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Date: 2/15/2012 12:26:00 AM
About your Transformation Tanka,if it was afternoon then change that West to East.Because a rainbow rises in the opposite side of the sun:)
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Date: 1/16/2012 1:24:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Valentine HAIKU" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/14/2012 1:26:00 AM
Big congratulations on your first place, Andrea! It's a very sensual poem straight from your heart. I am very happy to see your name among the winners. Have a wonderful weekend and thanks for all your sweet comments. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 1/13/2012 11:44:00 PM
Wonderful win for wonderful poem. Congratulation on your superb win, bl
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Date: 1/13/2012 3:07:00 PM
CONGRATS ANDREA ON A GREAT FIRST PLACE WIN .. AN EXCELLENT PIECE MY FRIEND.. LUV..
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Date: 1/13/2012 1:02:00 PM
This is warm and delightful Andrea.. Reminds me of a couple of days ago when we had sunshine which we hadn't had in a while! Beautiful! Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/13/2012 4:20:00 AM
Romance with the sun is HOTTTTT! LOve this even better the second time around..how awesome. I think this is the best one of your New Year, Andrea! Gwendolen
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Date: 1/13/2012 4:12:00 AM
Nice and awesome Haiku.Congratulations to you,Andrea for your superb win in PD`s Valentine Haiku contest.....
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Date: 1/13/2012 3:21:00 AM
Wonderful Haiku's Andrea-well done and congratulations, love and blessings, Brenda : )
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Date: 1/13/2012 1:44:00 AM
Very nice Andria, Congratulations on your win and thanks of all you nice commets x
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Date: 1/13/2012 1:23:00 AM
Andrea congrats on your win, fab haiku's, PS I am English through and through, one of my son's lives in Sydney, have been there a few times to visit..David
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Date: 1/12/2012 11:00:00 PM
Andrea, just a wonderful write. The sun is chasing you. Congratulations on your BIG first place win, Greg
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Date: 1/12/2012 9:23:00 PM
Andrea, ... Congratulation, on your first place in my contest. Thank you for charming up nature. Have a good night,..always,..p.d. ~ and yes you did them in time...
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Date: 1/9/2012 1:13:00 AM
Andrea Ohh the UV rays Andrea, she loves you to the hilt! Love Dalila
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Date: 1/8/2012 10:49:00 PM
Wow Andrea! One for the senses! I dig what you did with the Sun in this one! Awe-sum-ness!:)
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Date: 1/8/2012 10:29:00 AM
Did u laugh your head off with Robert's lil poem below? He is crazy for your work, dear!! It is so honoring! The last haiku is too funny! You went all out on this entry. I can sit back and learn from the MASTER!! Hope your day is bright, friend. Gwendolen
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Date: 1/6/2012 10:26:00 PM
Very lovely entry. these are brilliant Haikus and an enjoyable read. Always, Laura
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Date: 1/6/2012 2:22:00 PM
wonderful entry this for the contest. just love number 6. harry
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Date: 1/5/2012 3:01:00 PM
I was driving with the top up, as it's winter time, you know. Sliding round the corner as I hit a patch of snow. Your problem with your hickey does'nt pull my heart strings much. I hit dry road and then got towed, because I slipped the clutch.
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Date: 1/4/2012 9:23:00 PM
Cute poem and we are getting spring like weather and I am in my glory. ha ha Patti and Aaron were in a car accident today. A lady ran a red light and luckily they were in the suv rather than the car. The air bags blew and the the suv is totalled. So much for a fantastic new year. A cop was behind her so she has a good witness but man oh man we got a scare. Suv is only 3 months old but at least they are safe. love phyl
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Date: 1/4/2012 8:11:00 PM
hohoho, loved how you teased in the beginning yet end it with reality struck. good luck on the contest andrea!
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Date: 1/4/2012 3:09:00 PM
Cute one..Enjoyed the humor..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner for sure..I know PD will enjoy this one..Thanks for stopping by..I am glad that you found my mouse poem..Sara
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Date: 1/4/2012 3:06:00 PM
Beautiful collection of haiku, Andrea - and the hickey line is just so clever
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