Notes About The Poem

"Xanthippe" is a Greek figure from ancient Athenian history/ wife of Socrates, used as a metaphor for mental albatross, if you will.  Obsession #2 Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Seth Pina. Date written: 06/11/2026

Xanthippe


        you're a grease-fire film
   attached to drywall like salt
            s  p   i   I   l  e   d
   over a cracked, unwashed shoulder,
   the dull toothache 
                          throbbing
   through a 3 a.m. call,
   growing older, sharper, colder...
                    get out of my mind!

   you aren't some gothic ghost 
             in a tragic shroud,
   but a raw static hiss on busted station;
       a sagging weight ,
                    a stationary, 
   stubborn-as-a-mule cloud,
                a parasite 
   fattening on my hesitation...
                     get out of my mind!
 
              like orange rust, 
      nibbling at a clean steel blade,
the bitter, permanent  
               ink-stain you've made;
no velvet darkness here, 
        no weeping willow, 
               just concrete bricks
in my chest, and grit on my pillow...
         oh, xanthippe....get out of my mind!
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Crandall Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 6:11 PM
Great metaphors and similes!
Ibeh Avatar
June 13, 2026 at 9:01 AM
Thank you very much, David:-)
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