Xanadu

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His heart beats Connecting us Jointly Two together Sharing our spirits One purpose To share Life’s journey As one A couple Longing to Spend eternity Within a soft embrace Loved Like we are one heart Written and posted: June 4, 2020 Pick-A-Title, Vol 18 - Yalto 2 - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh YALTO is a form invented by Edward Ibeh Line 1 to 15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3, 3,5,6,1,5 syllables.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/8/2020 3:28:00 PM

So tenderly romantic, Regina - to "spend eternity/within a soft embrace." This verse operates on multiple levels. Congratulations on your win!

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/8/2020 7:37:00 AM

"eternity within a soft embrace"...so soothing Gina! Congratulations on your win. Much love and blessings :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2020 3:05:00 PM

I love that you took it to romance! Congrats, Regina.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/7/2020 2:00:00 PM

- A great and creative 3rd place ... congratulations so much, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/7/2020 7:13:00 AM

Beautiful picture and Yalto, Regina:-) Take me to your Xanadu! Congratulations on your podium finish!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/5/2020 10:29:00 AM

Terrific, awesome!, Blessings, Jennifer.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/4/2020 10:24:00 PM

A romantic poem that fits right in with my vision of Zanadu Regina. I hope this does great in the contest! Blessings xxoo

Jan Allison

Date: 6/4/2020 1:16:00 PM

aww going on life's journey together with your loved one is such a thing to treasure Regina, a lovely interpretation of Xanadu:-) hugs Jan xx