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Xanadu

His heart beats
Connecting us
Jointly
Two together
Sharing our spirits
One purpose
To share
Life’s journey
As one
A couple
Longing to
Spend eternity
Within a soft embrace
Loved
Like we are one heart



Written and posted: June 4, 2020
Pick-A-Title, Vol 18 - Yalto 2 - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh 
YALTO is a form invented by Edward Ibeh
Line 1 to 15:  3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,  3,5,6,1,5 syllables.

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Sam Kauffman Date: 6/8/2020 3:28:00 PM So tenderly romantic, Regina - to "spend eternity/within a soft embrace." This verse operates on multiple levels. Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Aditi Mishra Date: 6/8/2020 7:37:00 AM "eternity within a soft embrace"...so soothing Gina! Congratulations on your win. Much love and blessings :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/7/2020 3:05:00 PM I love that you took it to romance! Congrats, Regina. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/7/2020 2:00:00 PM - A great and creative 3rd place ... congratulations so much, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Edward Ibeh Date: 6/7/2020 7:13:00 AM Beautiful picture and Yalto, Regina:-) Take me to your Xanadu! Congratulations on your podium finish! Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 6/5/2020 10:29:00 AM Terrific, awesome!, Blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/4/2020 10:24:00 PM A romantic poem that fits right in with my vision of Zanadu Regina. I hope this does great in the contest! Blessings xxoo Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 6/4/2020 1:16:00 PM aww going on life's journey together with your loved one is such a thing to treasure Regina, a lovely interpretation of Xanadu:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply