Regina Mcintosh Poet Verse

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Xanadu

His heart beats
Connecting us
Jointly
Two together
Sharing our spirits
One purpose
To share
Life’s journey
As one
A couple
Longing to
Spend eternity
Within a soft embrace
Loved
Like we are one heart



Written and posted: June 4, 2020
Pick-A-Title, Vol 18 - Yalto 2 - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh 
YALTO is a form invented by Edward Ibeh
Line 1 to 15:  3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,  3,5,6,1,5 syllables.

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Sam Kauffman June 8, 2020 at 3:28 PM So tenderly romantic, Regina - to "spend eternity/within a soft embrace." This verse operates on multiple levels. Congratulations on your win!

Aditi Mishra June 8, 2020 at 7:37 AM "eternity within a soft embrace"...so soothing Gina! Congratulations on your win. Much love and blessings :)

Andrea Dietrich June 7, 2020 at 3:05 PM I love that you took it to romance! Congrats, Regina.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2020 at 2:00 PM - A great and creative 3rd place ... congratulations so much, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh June 7, 2020 at 7:13 AM Beautiful picture and Yalto, Regina:-) Take me to your Xanadu! Congratulations on your podium finish!

Jennifer Proxenos June 5, 2020 at 10:29 AM Terrific, awesome!, Blessings, Jennifer.

Connie Marcum Wong June 4, 2020 at 10:24 PM A romantic poem that fits right in with my vision of Zanadu Regina. I hope this does great in the contest! Blessings xxoo

Jan Allison June 4, 2020 at 1:16 PM aww going on life's journey together with your loved one is such a thing to treasure Regina, a lovely interpretation of Xanadu:-) hugs Jan xx