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This poem, text only, is included in my latest Book/eBook ‘Clive’s Uni-Verse – A Cornishman’s take on life’.  ISBN13: 9781800743342 published by Olympia Publishers in Jan 2022.

X marks the spot Where a young child had stood, Enjoying his friends company as only A young child could. X marks the spot Where the child laid dying, Medics there to save his life, Desperately trying. X marks the spot, From which the crowd were kept, The child’s mother who broke through And uncontrollably wept. X marks the spot Where the ambulance came The police taking measurements Photographing the stain. X marks the spot Where the piles of flowers were left, Where the moving tributes were made From those now bereft. X marks the spot Where the funeral procession slowed Where a community’s grief In rivers now flowed. X marks the spot Where the young child was struck By a man on a mobile In charge of a truck. X marks the spot Where a quick call was made The cost of this phone call, Extravagantly paid.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 8/3/2020 12:44:00 PM
wonderful! very touching...
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Clive Blake
Date: 8/4/2020 12:20:00 AM
Thank you Ilene. Not an easy subject to write about, but I felt it important to have a go! ~ Clive

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