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This poem, text only, is included in my latest Book/eBook ‘Clive’s Uni-Verse – A Cornishman’s take on life’.  ISBN13: 9781800743342 published by Olympia Publishers in Jan 2022.

X marks the spot
Where a young child had stood,
Enjoying his friends company as only
A young child could.

X marks the spot
Where the child laid dying,
Medics there to save his life, 
Desperately trying.

X marks the spot,
From which the crowd were kept, 
The child’s mother who broke through
And uncontrollably wept.

X marks the spot
Where the ambulance came
The police taking measurements
Photographing the stain.

X marks the spot
Where the piles of flowers were left,
Where the moving tributes were made
From those now bereft.

X marks the spot
Where the funeral procession slowed
Where a community’s grief
In rivers now flowed.

X marks the spot
Where the young child was struck
By a man on a mobile
In charge of a truck.

X marks the spot
Where a quick call was made
The cost of this phone call, 
Extravagantly paid.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 8/3/2020 12:44:00 PM
wonderful! very touching...
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Clive Blake
Date: 8/4/2020 12:20:00 AM
Thank you Ilene. Not an easy subject to write about, but I felt it important to have a go! ~ Clive

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