Wtf

When things fail to make the start
then the pleasure of the end 
takes the awful load of broken
promises enhanced in bold
of laughter, turned cold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
December 2, 2025 at 6:08 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 31, 2016 at 6:41 PM
Richard, so true, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
Dietrich Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 12:07 AM
Sad, but very well done. It's not a clerihew, why not just call it free verse?
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