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Haibun 

A Haibun is a poem with one paragraph of prose, followed by one poem of any form. There are no restrictions on the opening paragraph, nor on the proceeding poem. But there is only one coupling of prose and poem.

The day drags its feet, despite my efforts to speed up its pace. I got up late, so that I could sleep away the morning hours, aiming for a shorter day. Yet it’s only half past ten and I’ve already eaten breakfast and put my dishes in the sink. Glaring at the clock for the umpteenth time, doesn’t help, it just keeps on ticking away; yet I swear that it hasn’t budged since the last time I looked. I already tidied up my room, and picked up last years toys. And I’ve even put some milk and cookies out, hung my stocking up over the fireplace and wrote a note to Santa; yet it’s only noon, now what? What am I going to do for the next eight hours? Why does it always take forever for sleep to come, when Christmas day is the next day? Cloudy skies explode into puffs of snowy flakes, Harbingers of excitement and sweet sugar cakes. Ringing bells peal and chime, blessing this joyous day, Invitations to celebrate Jesus's birthday. Santa's reindeer are all set for their flight tonight To deliver presents; to every child's delight. Mommies and daddies are all smiles and hugs of love, As youngsters eagerly search the skies above. Slumber fuels dreams of elves and a flying sleigh, Dozing off to sleep, while awaiting Christmas day. All the months of waiting will soon be at an end, Yuletide spirits filling hearts as fun and faith blend. (Haibun/Acrostic/Rhyming Couplet)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/14/2018 10:47:00 PM
Lovely. What a lovely and complex form well executed. Congrats on your well deserved win, Emile.
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Date: 7/1/2018 3:19:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments are most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/26/2016 9:27:00 PM
EMILE, Congrats on your Best love poem #3 win. Hugs -- LINDA --
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Date: 1/27/2016 8:10:00 AM
Thanks Linda, your comments are most appreciated. Emile.
Date: 1/24/2016 5:55:00 AM
It's taken a while to regain some Twitter momentum, but I've hopefully managed enough to win you a few more reads. Best of luck; Tweets away...
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Date: 1/24/2016 10:38:00 AM
Thanks Scott, that's very nice of you, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 1/14/2016 4:46:00 AM
Brilliant take Emile.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 1/14/2016 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Upma, your support is most appreciated. Emile.
Date: 1/13/2016 11:55:00 AM
Emile, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love ** SKAT
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Date: 1/14/2016 8:36:00 AM
Thanks SKAT, your support is most appreciated. Emile.
Date: 12/23/2015 3:07:00 AM
Greetings Emile. Congrats for your amazing #1 placement in the Haibun Contest! ;-)
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Date: 12/23/2015 8:02:00 AM
Thanks Teddy, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 12/22/2015 3:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win!!!!Sara
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Date: 12/22/2015 8:07:00 PM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 12/21/2015 3:17:00 PM
Congratulations for winning with this spirited Christmas poem. Excellent!
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Date: 12/21/2015 3:33:00 PM
Thanks Susan, your visit means a lot to me. Emile.
Date: 12/21/2015 7:20:00 AM
Awesome effort and deserving win Emile. Loved this write for the season. Congratulations my friend!
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Date: 12/21/2015 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Michael, your praise means a lot to me. Emile.
Date: 12/20/2015 7:17:00 PM
Emile, Congrats on your Haibun Free-Style win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/21/2015 8:55:00 AM
Thanks LINDA, your visits mean a lot to me. Emile.
Date: 12/20/2015 11:06:00 AM
Emile, Congratulations on your Haibun Free-Styled win. WUV **SKAT**
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Date: 12/20/2015 12:33:00 PM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate everything you have done for me, your encouragements have always made me feel good about myself and strengthened me. Emile.
Date: 12/20/2015 10:18:00 AM
Congrats on a great win
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Date: 12/20/2015 12:31:00 PM
Thanks Joseph, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 12/20/2015 9:15:00 AM
Emile, this piece won me from the start. Now people will possibly think that I have awarded you 1st place because of the Yuletide reference, but the truth of it is that you took me back to my childhood. Christmas Eve's spend wandering around the house, in the dark, wondering how Santa was going to make his way through the extractor fan. Great work, a most endearing read.
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Date: 12/20/2015 12:29:00 PM
Thanks Scott, for the placing and the opportunity to try a new way of expressing myself, (this was my first Haibun freestyle). Emile.
Date: 11/24/2015 7:08:00 PM
Hello Emile... and this is Christmas as I remember it as a child - the wait was almost unbearable - Lindsay
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Date: 12/20/2015 12:27:00 PM
Thanks Lindsay, you're right the wait was almost unbearable, have a happy holidays. Emile.

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