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Wrong Love

Beauty no less pure than a drop of water from the cleanest falls, body with not too many assests to worry about but enough to enjoy as well as protect, eyes to stare at my face and still read emotions displayed across the back of my mind, the only one who doesn't need to know the darker details of my mind but still understands to find out. Care and concern from the bottom of her heart and worry at the blink of an eye when situations seem suddenly dim though they were previously shining like a diamond in front of the sun's beams. These words written are only a few reasons why she holds my heart and why I'll protect and serve her's till the day she sees me no longer fit for the responsibility. -poetic

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Date: 6/14/2016 6:28:00 PM
Charles Guidry Jr, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/23/2011 4:02:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Charles. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/22/2011 6:51:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup...so enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry tonight.. hope u enjoy your time on the site as u continue to share with luv..
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