Wrong Door

I dreamed I died, and was waiting to get in heaven,
and I could hear amazing grace,
I reached to open the door,
and it closed right in my face 
I thougt for sure I'd been good enough so god would let me in,
But I guess god hadn't forgiving me for all my sins
So I yelled out lord
I'm sorry for whatever I've done 
I through up my hands
and started to run 
Then Bam out of no where
a man stopped me right in my steps 
he said wats wrong son 
can I be of some help
. I said oh me oh my where do I begin
I went to heavens door 
But God wouldn't let me in 
He said calm down boy ,
I'm god and smiled with a grunt
that's because ur at the back door and u should have went around to the front.
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Agustin Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 2:14 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 23, 2025 at 4:27 PM
Wow! Crazy! LOL
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